You should do a second chapter where Dipper confronts the guy

I want dipper to fight

Aww! This was in character and it is amazing and really adorable! Now I feel like breaking that guy's nose too...

Oh my God... this is so unbearably sweet. It reminds of me and my brother. My brother is just nice but Dipper seems like a perfect brother.
I wish to have a brother like Dipper :(

This is so cute :)

Aww so cute I want a brother like that :)

That is so me with my sister. Anyon ewho screws with my sister will risk high blood loss and a low chance of survival.

I really liked this story and hope you continue on!

It's not Mermando, is it?
Really good story, but whenever someone speaks, use this " " instead of this ' '. Just helping you out there ;)

AWWWWWWW! AWWWWwwwwEEE! I cannot stop "aw"-ing at this. IT'S TOO CUTE! Amazing job! :)

Aw, Pines fluff! Nice one-shot!