Wow. That was really good and I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.

ohkay

Gurl! God dam that was so perf I can't right now omg I loved that so much! Your writing was perfect and your had amazing characterization. Perfect 10/10. I think it would be amazing if you did a full length story as well with this same premise, but anyway amazing I loved it you did a great job!

Wow what the shit

That was good! Definitely a hate fuck lmao

I love it

This should be made a book or more intimately a movie

Damn this is pretty good

Please. Just do nothing for the rest of this year but write novella length stories of Tris and Peter like this... daily.
Damn. That kiss in the bathroom. *iz ded*

Great right more

Oh my gosh this is one of my favorite Petris fanfictions ever and it's really well written. I know you put that it was finished at the end of the page but could you maybe write a sequel to this. It doesn't have to be long and I understand that you're probably really busy but feel free to email me about it

This is amazing! I ship Petris and this is so cool!

I love this. It is just brilliant. Great imagery and precise attention to detail creates a very interesting read. Perfect story for a hopeless romantic!
Please write more. This story has made my day.

That was one of the best fanfictions of divergent! Great job!

I think that you should one or a few more chapters because I want to read moreeeee!This was a great chapter!:-);-)

Will u write again

I really like this pairing. You did a great job with this story. I love it