Hi I just read your story zombies way cool.

Really zombies ️ cool

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of Crossover stories, and most have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

If they did not immediately start getting data packets from the social satellites that were supposed to exist, then the likely did not get back "home".

Did Harry end up in Atlantis as part of your series, or is this just a stand-alone story?

Yeah, Sam Carter would never say they were not evolved enough to understand something. Understanding things was her thing. Did you ever even watch SG1?

This is decent, but not a favorite. A problem with crossovers is figuring out who's rules win. In this case you had the zombie virus not be fully stoppable, even though with the level of tech Harry had it should have been. Also, I'm not buying they couldn't find uncontaminated DNA. If nothing else you have people buried before the outbreak...

god awful plot development.

I love all three writers' styles but your style plus stargate is too wordy.

Boring, the military chatter is too jarring. Jargons names and etc that are hard to relate to.

Thank you for sharing your story I enjoyed reading it

thank you for sharing
just saw that you made a reboot after I read this one. maybe you could put it in the description for everyone to see

im not sure what timeline this story is going by but the alterans took atlantis into Pegasus galaxy millions of years before canon story started, they destroyed then reseeded life in the milky way before they left from plague to escape and the spent millions of years seeding Pegasus galaxy. then the alterans retreated back through the stargate after losing to the wraith 10 thousand years before cannon began.

Interesting.

It took me a while to find this story once more. Because its not have anything related to Walking Dead in the summary it took me forever to figure out where to find it. Even then it required the Google search engine with key words.