Please continue I love your story

Great story! I really like how you started the story after her appearing there from Sabo's POV. That explained the situation way better than her POV could have at that point :3
And I gotta say, I loved how you wrote her arguing with Sabo and running off. T'was like being slapped in the face by the feels! I was a mess with a runny nose afterwards! D: XD

When Ace deadpan said "Hmpf, I don't like this" I really had to imagine a lil' Sasuke standing there. Which lead to me imagining a grown up Sasuke acting like a grown up Ace. Which in return made me laugh like a hyena C:

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I loved it! Dandan is truely a softie. Can’t wait till Luffy joins back in on the adventure! Thanks for sharing!

An oracle... good idea, its gonna help explain things but there is still the fact that she change things, so she is gonna need to be careful. Too cute Ace who fall asleep in her laps, I loved it. Great chapter.

Drop an atomic bomb right after a nuclear on the poor boy, why don’t you, Cheris?

Little ASL trio is so cute

Good chapter, I love how you put Cheris with Ace, Sabo and Luffy, she is the big sister/mom, and Ace likes her. Too cute.
Sunshine is such a good description of Luffy, hope to read more soon.

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Have a good time visiting your Gramps! Weekly updates sounds really nice, because this story just continues to get more and more adorable. Marco sooner too huh, that should be interesting. You've got a lot of plans that I can't wait to see come to the story. See you next update~! Keep up the AMAZING work!

I loved this! Luffy is so cute! I can't wait to read more!

I loved this xD It was awesome.

I loved this xD It was really cute.

This was cute.

This was good

very cool! I love when an oc becomes a marine! can't wait for more!