Wow, this story was really good and I hope to be able to read the sequel. You're quite the writer and I hope to see more from you.
And I think I saw what you did there with Moss and Three.:3

Whoa! It's over already? That is surprising...0-o. But if there's a sequeal planned than I'm sure it will be grand and I do believe I know who this mystery rat trainer/keeper dude is. :giggle:

Love this story of Moss background and how nicely it was all summed up. Good job and hope you write more amazing stories in the future.

0-o Moss...what happened in here? I'm really like this character and the thought you put into him Mable. His very original and I can't wait for more in the future. :D

0-o I did NOT see that one coming! Moss...what happened here?

Whoa. . . .thats scary. I think they either died or were never brought to life. Poor Moss. Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

Wow. Moss had one heck of an evil boss, didn't he? Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

Hmm I really liked this chapter for some reason; maybe because I got to see more into a past of 1 and 2 or the behavior of Moss here. But I found it very sweet and cute :D

Nicely done here Marble.

Hmmm...what IS Moss hiding?

Moss speaks German? Wow, didn't see that one coming. But that's very interesting and so was 1 knowing French well 2 spoke Latin. You really put a lot of though into your character huh?

I do like that small friendship going on between 6 and Moss here, it's very cute and sweet. Guess I read more in due time, because I'm to absorbed in this to stop now :3

YES! Now they find out he doesn't speak english! The hard part of the road is ahead of them, but that's the fun, lol.
I am so sorry too, on a related note, for my lack of replying to FRS. To keep it simple-life at my house has been absolutely nuts lately, but I will review tonight and I know things should be less hectic on the home front by next week...hopefully.
I can't wait to read more! I'm loving the chemistry between 1 and 2, and 6 and 8. XD

:D I know his deafness came from a accident, but I kinda had a helper in the area right? I'm really liking this story and can wait to see how this plays out.

He speaks a different language, doesn't he? If only they could figure out which one. Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

oh, the plot thickens. I like 8's reaction to 6's simple I need you...dirty dirty mind there 8. But, eek! I'm so scared and worried to see what will happen to Moss...

Poor Moss! Will he be okay?

Moss to Provide for Us.

Thats my idea for his purpose. Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!

Liliana Dragonshard

Hmm Moss is proving to be a interesting guy with pretty protective instistincts towards the others. Indeed there is some type of 9x6 sense going on her but that could just be me as I know you prefer different pairings. Though I gotta say that Moss is being very patient with 8 and seems to be very insight to his behavior.