Great story

I absolutely love this story! I wish there were more.

I doutb JACK would except it !

This story is so wonderful and your writing is SO good! I was really hoping to see how Angela found out about them or how that convo went!

Just found d this story. it was very well written. Truly hope you might find inspiration a d time to complete it ... it will be read and appreciated.

This story is so good but you have left us hanging for a long time. Pleeeeease updaaaaaaaate.
Thx

Why is Cavanaugh asking Maura about Jane's fitness to return to work. She's a medical examiner and doesnt have the authority to allow Jane back to work. Only the department shrink would be able to do that.

Come on come back, it should be illegal to write grate fan fiction and leave it incompleye

Wow...just...wow! I loved reading the 23 chapters the first time and the second read has been even better. I just love the way you have illustrated the truth of there connection and nailed their voices so perfectly. I would love to see the story completed but the journey both times has been well worth the time. Thank you so much

I can't begin to tell you how much I adore this story! The love and tenderness between them is so strong and just stunning. Maura and Jane have been given so much depth and dimension here, yet they feel perfectly in character. Your writing is so warm and alive that I can see them clearly in my mind. I know that you haven't updated in years, but I'm not to proud to beg...Please come back to this amazing story; it's to good to go unfinished! Thank you for the wonderful read!

I think we would still like you to finish this. It's too good to abandon!

YES!

I wondered if he was gonna show up. Damn.

Dang it, you made me cry!

So good the first time reading it, even better the second time.