Toph may be able to sense a pregnancy. idk. this is a really good fic so far I look forward to reading more _

Ouiggy zutarians

Please continue this I want to read more and see what happens!

Great Chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more of this fanfiction.

Oh man! This is great! I hope you can update soon.

Oh my gosh!

This is honestly so amazing! I love it so much! Please update soon!

Ooh. Heywhe he runs tonhel want he has to take her with him.

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! But I was just wondering how Katara healed. Shouldn't it have taken longer? And where's her scar? It just kinda feels like she went from being in an unbearable amount of pain to feeling nothing at all. Other than that, keep up the good work! I love the idea and it's quite well written!

I doubt Katara would recognize a turtle duck as she grew up in the South Pole. She's never been to the royal palace before.

Aang is on his way. Just hang in there Katara. Zuko had his chance to change his outlook and join your side but he wasted the opportunity. Just watch out for a white shape in the sky.

It's a sign that Aang is close. Sokka wont rest until he finds you. Your big brother will come for you. Toph and Aang will figure this out. Soon you'll be aboard the bison with your family, including Momo.

We haven't seen Appa and Momo yet. I guess they're with the group?

OH MY GOD!

Look I understand if you just want to write a fluff piece because you are a Zutara shipper but you could at least be a bit more upfront about it. I mean geez the title says this is an AU of what would happen if Katara got hit with lightning instead of Aang. I was expecting an actual story, but no within the first chapter we're at a whore house. And within the second we're getting Katara dressed in skimpy clothing. It's hard to like your story when there are so many better zutara stories that actually put effort into the relationship.

My favorite example being an AU about what if zuko had joined the gaang at the battle of ba sing se instead of azula. And guess what it takes time for the relationship with katara to form. They arent kissing in the second chapter.

I know there are fan fic writers who soley write just to get there rocks off. But dont try and hide it in the description by saying this is an au of what could have happened. Just tell us that you are writing fluff and move on

El Cid the Champion

I thought Katara looked good in red. Especially in that Fire Nation outfit she wore in book three I wish I had that dress.