I finally got around reading DW fanfics, and I just got to say I love the mystery. The Leviathan, and wow...It's amazing the plot, especially to sort of show about Time Lords thing, and how the Doctor reacted.

I never said this before but after reading so many articles of how Creative Writing works, I say you do a very excellent job writing. I noticed how you wrote the POV of this story. There isn't a inner thought, or something in the sentences that reveals their thoughts or motivation.

The two most impressive thing in this story, besides the amazing plot, is how you wrote the characters and did it without being OOC. The Doctor and Rory are the most impressive in my opinion. Amy is OK. I could totally picture it and listen to their voices. Ha! I would be convince BBC would allow you to write DW book and publish it! The next impressive thing is that you follow the rule "Show, Don't Tell" - There is a lot of information you are holding back and you just wrote the actions presently. You don't reveal the motivations.

Wow, this was a really good story. Fun ride to follow.

What a great adventure :D I really enjoyed reading this story!
Looking forward to reading your next Doctor Who story, whenever that'll be. :3

Well, I can't say I'm not disappointed the story is over soon. I certainly wasn't expecting that, considering how long many of other stories have been, but I understand. This was a fun adventure through and through and the ending did wrap up all the loose ends, everyone getting their happy ending. I really do hope you're not finished with writing Doctor Who & 11. I'm still not over losing my favorite Doctor & your stories have been a nice way for him to still have some quality adventures. I've loved reading your stories over the last 2 years, please, don't keep us all waiting for too long!

It's the end already? Nooo! But I hope for a sequel soon? :)

Aww I will miss Zarin. It was so sweet when he told the Doctor that his love only became deeper:) Can't wait for another DW story.

Aburt ending,but supposed not to bad...Will you be writing another story soon?

Wow! Reading your trilogy with the Lemkin Factor, and then up comes another chapter! Which has similar stuff... dear Doc, whatcha gonna do.

I will never forgive you for ending the chapter like that. Ever. Such an enjoyable chapter to read! Update soon! XD

Uuuuuuuuuh *mindfuck* what happened?

Heh, Amy a Time Lady-should have seen it coming xD. Again brilliant plot concepts! Your imagination is fantastic!

ooooo ohoohhhh... i guess that was not what the doctor wanted... but the city is safe, due to the doctors cleverness so that's good, and now he can concentrate fully on amy...
still loving it, never giving up, excited for the next chapter! see you soon!

Oh wow. What a ride?...like how Sarin has a new,perspective on life...what's,with Amy...two heart beats...is this caused by the loom...Will the Doctor sort it?
Oh hope you update,this,soon.

Okay, it's official I am the queen of late reviews.
Wow, I can see why this was a difficult chapter to write. It came out wonderfully though. Aww, Zarin made friends with the apex

So happy to see an update! Lots going on & very exciting. The Doctor isn't going to be feeling too well when he comes to... and just how is that last transmitter going to be placed in time? I can't wait for more, please hurry!