Reviews for Pretending
GallagherGirl537 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
htsi was pretty good.
Out of the shadows chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
A wonderful peice of writing , you feel Hermoine’s pain and how helpless she is. You feel her sadness and Lucius Malfoy's evil persona. A true skill you have and I really enjoyed your fic , well done.
Arabella Minerva chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Interesting a little confused at the moment. but i hope to read more.
GOOD STORY chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Too bad this is the whole story, it's really good - I wish you'd continue. (disapointed sigh)
HarleyB123 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
this is a great story keep it up.
someonelse chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
interesting hope you sontinue it.

-toodles, until i review
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
tHAT WAS AWSOME KEEP ADDING PLEZ
meeka chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
this fic is good enough, but for those other readers, I think that this is the whole story, and there will be no new chapters. well, just look at the date on which the author last updated.

Anyway, it's very well written, so well done. :-)

meeka
C-630 chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
WHAT HAPPENED? Please update soon. Will Voldie know, will Dumbledore know? Will anyone know. hell Does Lucious know, was he drunk? What was he doing there? UPDATE!
WorldsBiggestHermioneFan chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
I love it! GET MORE! GET MORE! It's sooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooodddd!
b leeding while b reathing chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
Ohhh i Like this! Why'd you stop?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
more.
lady redis chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
There better be more of this story!
lagony chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
stupid, stupid fic! Do you really believe that someone would fall in love with that evil Lucius? Disgusting!
unfid chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
well. what can I say? Though it's pretty fucked up story I like it. Continue!
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