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gabumon7 chapter 52 . 2/7 Any plans to contijnue? |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/8/2018 Lmao, Lin Milk Bags? This chapter was hilarious! |
guest chapter 52 . 10/2/2017 This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! Thank you so much :) |
Kuvira Jr chapter 52 . 7/31/2017 I love this story please keep writing! |
FullMoonPhoenixShadow chapter 52 . 9/3/2015 Wow that's what I call a quick update. Thank you for the new chapter, it's awesome. Lin is just... Lin and Tenzin really worries too much. I'm glad that you haven't abandoned the story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Here is a new prompt: Lin's family members (including Suyins Family and Toph and Kya and Bumi) are making bets whether Rohan will be a boy or a girl PS: Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes, but english is not my first language. |
FullMoonPhoenixShadow chapter 51 . 9/2/2015 Aw I really love your story. Please update soon, I can't wait to read a new chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 Prompt: Tenzin and Lin expecting Rohan |
Josch chapter 4 . 6/7/2015 This is really nicely written! I just was kind of confused how Su came up with sex.. it was funny tho so never mind :) Should have probably taken a smoother bridge considering the topic beforehand was abuse and murder and stuff.. I also think it's nice to hear about a happy and healthy siblings' relationship from time to time so.. yeah- I like all those chapters :D And don't you worry about aussie things. Up until now, nothing in particular caught my eye in the aspect of grammar and such. And it should totally not be that important ;) |
wicked.faith10 chapter 51 . 5/30/2015 I completely enjoy your series! I actually follow a few of your stories and I must say your writing is excellent! You capture characters and behaviors so well! I hope to read more! |
Wikkiwikki chapter 51 . 4/4/2015 Really great! I like the disordered oneshots, gives awesome feels to each6 scene! |
Rogertapp chapter 51 . 4/4/2015 Opal is so awesome! I love Opal! Awesome story. :) |
Guest chapter 49 . 4/2/2015 awwww this was such a sweet chapter! |
dickard23 chapter 50 . 4/3/2015 Aw Toph. She should have made up a bedtime story. |
Rogertapp chapter 50 . 4/3/2015 I liked how you put Opal in this story. I also liked story time. :) |
Rogertapp chapter 49 . 4/2/2015 So good! I love it! :) |