Also this is cringe worthy. I'm going to watch the Miracle on Ice to get that sex scene out of my mind

Is that it? I was hoping for some more

they are just kids other then that 10/10

welllllllllllllllllllllllllll that was short

That was so sad but next time can you ad pictures

aw man ya'll that was best freind anthony is playing pokemon lets go pikachu right
is this based off of pokemon xy?

I CANT BEALIVE IT ENDED PLEASE MAKE MORE

Seriously? It ends just like that..? *Inhales* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. DAMN! DAMN! DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

wait is serena's canon last name yvonne? because in the manga instead of serena its Y or Yvonne Gabena.

Whens the next update?

Cause at the time of this

Its gettin incredibly close to a year since last update.

Why did they battle the spearow for just one apple ain't that tree well a apple tree I understand with them getting angry but they could just get another apple instead of battling the spearow for that one apple and risk getting hurt

You have no idea how much times I have read this story. THIS was THE best fanfic I read and it WILL be forever my favorite. I am obsessed with fanfics but hey, you got a favorite! :D

They should eventually evevoled

Well even if they aren't in the same egg group doesn't mean that they can't find an egg somehow and adopt it as their own.

C.D.

I'd be sitting on the beach or on the boardwalk sunning myself and eating flavored ice with custard with it with a box of taffy next to me and eating at this one burger stand that I like to get these awesome burgers.

C.D.