Eh, It's a bit too man on fire for me. Why not just have it spin equal horror as his little trip into the mind of the biotic leader? I know no one gets out of life alive, but Parker deserves better than this shit sandwich.

Granted so does Liara, kaiden, ash, wrex...

It's making the series hard to enjoy. Steep walls are fine, but invisible barriers at the top of those walls are just exhausting.

Crap, shep has got off lightly. What next, commander brain in jar has to save galaxy from ultra reapers with help from sgt. stick?

If he's going to be a demon, well he's already dropped "fuck you that's how". Time for an enthusiastic walk.

Soooo, the metaphor jellyfish with the dread injections is dead... right?

Yeah, about him handling the death singer stuff well, yikes.

Yay! The humor in the horribly bleak has returned!

Parker really should go in to his nearest Rachni dealership and get the whole duct-tape package replaced, and the ol' noggin defragged. He's done a hell of a job suppressing the death singer dot exe so far, but with the guillotine margins post virmire and kaiden, his ace so far might as well be an iron lung.

You hurt my feelings. Doesn't mean much, but it made me hesitant to pull up this fic. But I like what was written in the first one, and I like how close Udina got to dying.

So I'm giving this a shot.

Aw Fuck the Shit hit the fan now hasn't it? Damn taking Liara biotics after scarring her up though thats fucking cold. Realistic but cold.
Also what the hell is That Yagh playing at with Rannoch? Is it the Geth? Is he trying to start a war with the Quarians or is it something worse?

Awww poor Feron I kinda saw it coming given your track record still, sad. But Mordin didn't set up his clinic till a few months before ME2 and wasn't The Brokers Chief Enforcer a huge freaking Salarian dude? Aw well call it artistic licence, anyway that Dagger guys pretty fucking badass, The part about him walking away from trying to assassinate Liara's mom was super cool too.

This is really freaking awesome. Also I would love to see more side stories for the 2 year gap.

Only 52 thousand words and complete. I dont think thats enough to make up for the first volume where the main character made things so many times worse. I don't think there is any way to now prove Parker's worth. Plus I don't think I could stand reading a continuation of the depressing story line. Maybe if things had gotten better but from this it seems its just worse. The main character is still useless in a fight and has nobody close to him. He has no girlfriend and even his relationships with the Normandy crew don't seem that strong. He still will probably only live for ten years or less now and he still cant prevent anything. Still depressing and frustrating. I liked the writing style, and the quality of the work. I loved the story in the beginning, it was new and well written and had captured my attention making me devour more of the story. Then it just became depressing and the main character turned out to be more than useless. It was so good and yet came to a depressing and frustrating end and now I cant enjoy it. I think Im more mad that something that in my opinion was so great and fun to read, became so sad and hard to read. I really hope you put your talents into something with a bit more happiness. Definitely following the author, but not the story.

I really enjoy this series! I hope you decide to continue it one day!

Keep doing what you do, cause this is awesome!

Sweet I can't wait for bionic Shep.

God that is terrifying, I'm glad I live in California nice and safe with our brown recluse spiders and cougars.

I don't what to say other than that this story is going to be intense.

Amazing, Enjoy the plot, Cool