Looking for some DiaLovers Yaoi, which is hard to find and come across this. It has an interesting plot line to it, despite L/Raito assaulted Subaru (can't deny I didn't do that to some characters myself), it was a little rushed. If there were other chapters to it, it would be cool, but if it's just problems with trying to find time to write or writer's block, I can understand. I saw it said rewriting and Shu was in the story, I guess he would've been in the other chapters as a big brother figure if this was centered around Subaru and Raito as a couple. Karl as neither father but head of a school, wow, can't say it helps troubled teens as he's a mischievous adult himself, making trouble in the fandom.

There is multiple spelling, grammar, punctuation errors, and think a couple times you swapped the L for an R on the pervert's name. Don't find it much to be concerned about. Subaru is a little out of character, if it was fixed, it might be somewhat more interesting. Rushed as I said, it skips around a bit, especially on some unimportant/important details. But I won't go into all of that to be kind.

It was good despite all of that, don't really ship Subaru and Raito but yaoi is yaoi. And this fandom defiantly need more of it. Rather than all the OC brides or Yui, I find these more entertaining. So yeah it needs work, but it was a cool and interesting plot line. Was it just going to be the Sakamaki brothers rather than adding the others? It's fine if it was, just a passing thought.
Well I'm gonna post this review and follow just in case. I hope you can get your writing creativity back to continue this one day.

- Blackstar

Well, apart from the the trouble of trying to read this, with all the spelling mistakes, and what not, and including the seriously badly out of characterness of Subaru, It was a really good read. I look forward to reading more of this story, simply because it is the only one I have found where the boys are not all fawning over Yui, and Subaru is the one getting the action from the boys, especially Laito and Shu (One I am still waiting to read about)

So Other than the bad spelling and that, I do like this story. I will be following it, and favoring it just so I can continue reading it when you post more chapters. So keep up the good work, and maybe see if you can find a beta to help with the spelling and mistakes :) I also have the same issue with my spelling so don't think to badly on it, I constantly get told my spelling is terrible. Anyway please update soon :)

Good story, it's rear to see stories like this you know so nice work and you update soon. ( )