| Reviews for Return to Egypt |
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   commanderbog chapter 7 . 5/12/2019 Wow...you really took my breath away with how you wrote Ramses. It's easy to imagine Ramses being this protective over him, and their humorous bantee is SO natural in your writing! well done! I couldn't bring myself to read their "scene" because they are BROTHERS, but you have to be the best Ramses writer, hands down. |
| commanderbog chapter 1 . 5/12/2019 ohhh snap he punched him! |
| lightheart133 chapter 1 . 12/5/2017 This is the real ending for The Prince of Egypt |
| yarr chapter 7 . 12/19/2016 I just read your story in one sitting. I loved it! It was perfect, and exactly what I was looking for. Ramses was depicted perfectly, strong and fierce and protective yet loving towards Moses. Thank you for writing. |
| Jasper's Waifu chapter 7 . 10/11/2016 Love it |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2016 I like this version a LOT more than the original. No first borns dying and the Hebrews are free to go. And Rameses gets his brother! I was kind of intrigued and shocked when I saw the summary of this fic because the pairing never really occurred to me before but I'm sooooo glad I decided to read this. I definitely won't be able to watch the movie now without reading this afterwards. Thank you for sharing this. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2016 Dear god, have my prayers been answered? Is this an actual, decent Prince of Egypt fic I see, with little to no typos and barely any OOC? It appears so. bless you, author. |
| claire1663 chapter 7 . 3/17/2016 hello, thank you for this stor. I love it. All the best |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/14/2016 just found dis treasure today. thanks for this amazing fanfic |
| Resalicia Belger chapter 7 . 11/2/2015 Well done! I just love your story! I've never read any Prince of Egypt story before but that! Wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing this story of yours! I hope your following texts/ideas will be that well if not better! |
| Benevolence Black chapter 1 . 8/22/2015 Wonderful writing skills; a lot of people mess up first person on this site. With a few very minor typos here and there the first chapter was already a very fun read. The only thing I'd ever do when editing it is to make the exchange between Moses and Tzipporah less rushed. It felt a little detached, especially with the amount of emotion that's in the rest of the piece. Definitely going in my favorites. |
| scoolcool chapter 7 . 8/4/2015 This is the very first Prince of Egypt Fanfiction that I have read. I was a bit sceptical to read it, but I have to say that I love it! Good job! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/25/2015 It was so lovely and beautifully written, the plot and characters were so well thought out. Wonderful story, my only complaint is that it ended. |
| Kurai01 chapter 7 . 7/18/2015 Homg I hope u conntinue! I really love this story and how it so well write! Please update cx |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/4/2015 This was amazing! I loved the story and it gave me all the feels I wanted without Rameses's son dying lol |
