You’re an amazing writer. When I’m reading the sequel I feel like I’m inside the story watching and feeling everything that is going on with the characters most especially the authentic love between Jade and Tori. I also know that the story will be fantastic when I can hear the actual characters from the show saying the dialogue I read on your story and believe me they are on-point.

I’m also please to see that even when Jade and Tori are together, Jade doesn’t transform in to a love sick puppy which I’ve seen a lot on Jori fanfictions which is very un-like Jade. So seeing what you have done here, I’m impress.

This was so COOL! It’s a rare thing in this fandom to find a story that captures everyone’s character perfectly, but you’ve totally managed it. Your ideas are so unique and intriguing; how did you manage to come up with the plot of the short film? It’s so original and so JADE. That description of the script had me more hooked than most movie blurbs I’ve seen! I would actually pay money to watch that film.
I love how you gave Jade her moment to shine, with everyone else getting their recognition as well. I also appreciate how you didn’t feel the need to force a happy ending between Jade and her father. It would’ve felt too unnatural and fast for my liking.
Anyway, this was so fun to read and I really enjoyed it! Great job!

Are you sure you are not secretly Dan Schneider? You perfectly capture the characters, setting and humor that is is a little unsettling. Regardless I loved the first story and am loving this one as well.

You really captured their personalities. It's amazing

So good

Oh, my, this was an amazing ride.
The prequel was one of my favorite Jori fics back in the day, I must have read it over five times, and recently a friend asked me for a recommendation of Jori fics, and I couldn't not name yours; on looking up the prequel for the link, I found out you had written this sequel and MY GOD WAS I HAPPY
I just finished and I really wanna thank you for sharing it with us. This was a very unique and touching story, and I enjoyed every single chapter.

good story

First at all! That was so fücking fantastic
Ok, I'm Mexican so, that's the reason than my English sucks but I'm trying ;)
Guuuurl! Omg I read all of this just in one day, I'm a little obsses with this
You write so good, keep do it ;)

Ahhhh! This was so good! Everyone is so in character

Precioso!

Really awesome story, loved the relationship here. Great ending.

Wow

Standing ovation!

Beautiful.

Exelente historia