Different but pretty good so far. The thing I was wondering is why Penny and Bernadette has not picked up on the part that Raj was working the night the guys said the were picking him up from a bar. Well I hope you pick the story back up and don't let it fall to the side like a lot of other writers seem to do.

Saw some flaming in the comments. Don't listen to them. You clearly stated in the summary that this is going to be shenny so if they don't like it they can gtfo.

Personally I have more problems with your OC. He doesn't bring anything to the story so far imo. On top of that you write him like he is some kind of superman. Like you took sheldon, discarded his lesser traits, and added looks and mussels and stuff. Tbh he sounds too perfect too like him or empathize with him.

great story! I cant wait to read more! I hope Penny and Bernadette figure out that the boys lied to them! update soon

Leonard cheating on Penny? What the fuck! More Shenny ugliness by a fucking pathetic burnt Shenny. Asshole.

Ugly, fucking, rotten hating Shenny. As if Leonard would ever cheat on Penny. What a delusional asshole you are. You said you haven't watched the show for years. Let me bring you up snuff. Penny loves Leonard! Yes! And they are engaged! So, since Leonard won't be leaving the show and neither will Amy, so maybe you will? Find another fandom where you can spit your hate filled bile? And direct your ample delusional hate somewhere else? No? Oh well. So just like every other shit filled Shenny you're going to give us OOC hateful Leonard bashing fare. Yea! I look forward to it so with each and every chapter I can tell you how much your story is delusional and how much it sucks. Oh yeah. And fuck you too, you ignorant asswipe.

I like it, interesting story so far. Sorry its not what you intended, but sometimes morphs and takes on a life of its own. And a story that has enough life to it to, to become alive and shift is a lot better than a story with no life at all.

Poor Raj.

Interesting turn about the other night. Who is Christopher? A lot of things seem to remind Penny of Sheldon. :-)

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Good chapter! I like Christopher!

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I just found this story and I'm really enjoying it. Thanks for sharing it and I can't wait until the next installment.

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Aawwww. This chapter was cute. Everyone was so adult and caring. Why can't they be like this on the show?

Anyway, I think Sheldon is becoming a real man.

Very nicely done. Good job.