Waaah! This is so k-KAWAII!
But I would never forgive anyone, not even Gouenji Shuuya for cheating owo.
But KYAAA! ITS SO CUTE CUTE CUTEEEE

Very nicely portrayed! I like how it went. By the way, welcome to FF.

EEEEEEK! Kawaii! *glomps Tsurugi*
Tsurugi: *surprised* WHAT THE F-
*hits him with a pool noodle* No language! And Taiyou! How dare you cheat on me?! *starts hitting him repeatedly with the pool noodle*
Taiyou: Ow! I thought we made up!
NEVAH.
Taiyou: Dang it...
I love Haku-kun! *glomps Hakuryuu*
Hakuryuu: -_-
I loved this! So kawaii! But now I hate Taiyou. That's not your fault though! Ja ne!

Yes! I finally have time to write a review! You see I read this last night when it was very late and fell asleep before I could review! Okay, so a few things...

First, WOW! That was an amazing one-short! :3 It was really well written, no grammar and or spelling mistakes at all, which I think is fantastic! Plus I love how hoe this one-short had so many emotions! I loved it! And I love that end part with the kisses! So CUTE! It was by far the best Taiyou x reader one-short I have ever read in my life! :D We'll done!

Second of all...WELCOME! Welcome to FanFiction world of Inazuma Eleven! It is really nice to meet you! *Bows politely* My name is Yamazaki Honoka! But you can call me Honoka! *Shakes your hand* I love meeting new people! I hope we can become close friends! Please PM me! I love to chat and I'm available most of the time! If you ever have any question please go ahead and ask! :3 Im more than happy to help!

Third; I can tell that you will be a great person to get along with here! I can also tell that you have a gift for writing stories! If you ever write another story I will be super happy and read it right away, cause well you Rock! :D Keep up this amazing work! If you do you'll be one of the best! I can tell! So like I said PM me if you have question(s) or you just want to chat! :3

Over all I welcome you to our Happy, Soccer Playing, Inazuma Family! :)

Lots of love Honoka-chan!

P.S: Wow! I loved this one-short so much! It took me hours to stop blushing! :3

I really love this fic! :D Why did Taiyou cheat me? Well... Luckily, the romance has finished well :D Very good job! :D

Okay. First of all. Welcome to FFN! Nice to meet you. I'm Haru-chan! I hope we become good friends. :D

This one shot was so cute. I liked the way you described (F/N) feelings. And I didn't notice any mistakes. Which is really good. (Well, Duh!) I hope to see more of your stories in the future.

I hope you enjoy your time here in this fandom. If uou need any help, don't hesitate to ask me. See you around! ;D

Haru-chan :)

Nice one, really nice! The words they say don't sound like a poem or a song, which is good because that makes the whole thing more realistic. And I love how the reader tries to get away from him to lessen her pain. Really beautifully described!

By the way, welcome to FanFiction! if you don't get something or want to know something, feel free to PM me and I'll try to explain things to you, okay? You can PM me by clicking the yellow speach bubble next to this review or you can click my name, which leads you to my profile, and send me a PM from there.

I hope we can be friends here! Hopefully I see more stories from you! (A)

Xx Att-chan

Ps. This story is a one-shot, right? Then I think you should mark it as 'complete'. To do that, log in and click "publish" "manage stories". Then you click this story and a window appears with how many reviews, views, followers, favourites, etc. you got. If you scroll down, you should come across the option to mark your story as 'complete' or 'in process (something like that'. Just click complete and save your changes.

Okay, that's it for my nagging! Please keep on writing!

TAIYOUUUU! X33
Ahhh why did you cheat on me? OAO
The reason... I can only think of hormonal effects on teenagers or so, hehe...

No grammatical errors, I see! Nice! /thumbs up/

By the way, welcome to the Inazuma Eleven fandom of FFN! :3
Enjoy your time here!

WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW! SUGOI DESU NE!
Luv it! And I love Taiyou! Bye!

Oh my goodness... I feel like I'm about to explode from all the massive cuteness! O.o (:3333333333) *inhales and then exhales* THIS IS SOOOOO KAWAIIII! I CAN'T STOP BLUSHING! AND CRYING! FROM BOTH TEARS OF SADNESS AND JOY!

It's a pleasure to meet you Dreamless Cupid! :3 I'm Minami Shouji, but you can just call me Sho/Nami which ever you prefer. ;) Welcome to the fandom of Inazuma Eleven! It's rare for a writer from Greenland to be here! I thought you were from the Netherlands. XD

Let's talk to get to know each other! I'm sure you already know how to PM someone, right? ;)