| Reviews for Day Out |
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Sakura521 chapter 1 . 4/12/2019 Aww~ so sweet and cute they are 3 love them |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 That was so cute! :3 |
farawisa chapter 1 . 9/12/2014 awwww. so cute! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 So cute and believable that it hurts. :3 |
Eyeinthesky chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Yeah! The KaiShin/ShinKai are definitely my favorite Luna. |
JelpHasNails chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 I like how they sorta of just fell together at the end without a big, "I like you!" to go with it. Very sweet when it's so obvious that no words are needed. |
Bunnyz-chan chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Oh this was adorable. I liked the first part but I especially liked the part at the park. I love the kids and teens who all came to see him play. And the dinner with Chikage was great. I like how everybody except Shinichi seemed to know exactly how Kaito felt about Shinichi (presumably because Kaito told them, or at least went on and on about him). And the ending with the kiss and "there's a piece of glitter on your lip" and the whole scene was cute. So it was great, awesome job! |
Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Lalalalalalalslalalalalalalalalalla I'm in such a happy mood right now! I loved this! When I first saw the notification of a Kaishin story from you I was SO HAPPY! I mean FTW kaishin is my favourite pairing and I love the way you write and the way you write them. This had such a nice flow and as so interesting, hilarious and very my-heart-is-going-to-explode-happily too! XD when Shin-chan said he got the mail and that sexy blue tie and when Kaito was doing the ABORT MISSON expression XD OMG the feels when Kaito asked him to dinner and I love how Kaito said "pretty detective..etc" that was adorable and romantic and amazing! And the lead up to the kiss, the kiss and after was incredible! This was so well-written and I'm in love with it! Thank you so much! |
Yami no Tsuki chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Ah, good old KaiShin. How I have missed you. Great once again! :D Honestly, I think you're the reason I've converted from 'HeiCon(Shin) over KaiShin over RanShin' to 'KaiShin over HeiCon(Shin) over RanShin'... |
Assasin8 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Awww, fluff! It looks like they both like each other here but no one wanted to admit anything until the last few paragraphs... It's interesting, I think this is the first time I've seen "KaiShin" standing alone in one of your descriptions! I really loved it! The kids in the park were particularly funny, you could practically see Kaito panicking! I always love reading these things, and thanks for doing such an awesome job with these prompts! |
Black-Kat Jinx chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 I think all your readers will need a trip to the dentist as well at this rate! I loved that ending. The whole glitter conversation was soo cute! The idea that Kaito holds magic shows for children at the park is something I enjoy immensely, too! It would definitely be something I could see the magician doing a lot. Overall, it was a great fix from beginning to end and I am happy we are back to these two adorable teens. |
incandescent stars chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 oh my gosh this is so cute i'm not okay right now bc emotions |
Suezanne chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 this is adorable |