| Reviews for The Pretender |
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   Alley2 chapter 14 . 4/29 Wow, what a great story. Great characterization. I love the way you wrote both their relationship and the 'case.' |
| Whovianeverlark17 chapter 1 . 3/1 love it! |
| daphnaea chapter 14 . 2/8 This is such a great story! Lisbon's qualms about her place in Jane's heart at the start are spot on, and Jane's honesty and devotion to her are great. Erica's machinations are also very her and very fun. And the proposal at the end is a fantastic moment, and feels very earned. I wish the actual episode had been more like this! |
| Msimone chapter 14 . 3/19/2019 ooh i loved this story |
| Grrarrggh chapter 14 . 7/13/2018 Now that's the way a series of The Mentalist should start! Heller doesn't know what he's missing. |
| Grrarrggh chapter 12 . 7/13/2018 If anything, I think your readers will be showing up at your doorstep with pies and cakes. At least I would if that wasn't super creepy. |
| Grrarrggh chapter 10 . 7/13/2018 Ah, an equal and loving relationship. |
| Grrarrggh chapter 9 . 7/13/2018 Any chance of a few sequels to this story? An AU Season 7? I'd love to see THIS Lisbon and Jane working together at the FBI. |
| Grrarrggh chapter 5 . 7/12/2018 You do a fabulous job of having them actually talking through, and thinking about, their relationship as a romantic partnership instead of a professional/friendly one. It's nice to see them doing that in the first few weeks after they've gotten together, especially as Patrick is thinking about marriage. Wonderfully realistic and keeping in character, yet still sweet and what I wish Heller & Co would have done. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/9/2017 Great! |
| FandomObsessedGirl1 chapter 14 . 8/30/2016 I loved this! It was so sweet and well written and anything that ends with Paris can't go wrong! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/21/2016 Oh again you are a good writer both the romance and the exciting bit are wonderfully written Thank you for the read |
| Edelweisss chapter 14 . 10/1/2015 I enoyed the ride ! Thank you I loved the way you developped their relationship in this one ! The struggles seemed real and the characters were true to themselves ! That's a good jisbon my dear... |
| Holobe chapter 14 . 7/29/2015 Had a quite dull day so I killed some time reading old fanfics and this is just as good as the first time I read it! Suspense, love, action, perfect pace wanting me to read more and a great Lisbon and Jane portrait. Your story definitely has more "go" than the actual episode. Absolutely one of my all time favourites. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/24/2015 I enjoyed this story so much! Thanks! |
