| Reviews for The Present |
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   Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 9/3/2019 Filling her whole office with roses? How extravagant :D |
| ksouza3 chapter 1 . 7/1/2017 Love the dynamic you created between Hermione and Tom. Thanks for writing! |
| Danglingfeet chapter 1 . 1/13/2017 i love this! wish it was longer |
| oslca35 chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 Loved it, gave me butterflies |
| Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 11/4/2016 Its like you built up the karma for her to have a great ending. Her shityty day ended on a high note. Great story! |
| AMMiss chapter 1 . 5/6/2016 Magnificently written. I absolutely love it! Thanks for posting this work for us readers to read. Happy Writing! :) |
| iwillwrestleforbacon chapter 1 . 3/20/2016 I dig it |
| Anonymous Presence chapter 1 . 2/3/2015 This is so sweet. :) I love a good modern fic, and sometimes they're never done right. But this was cute. Hermione's bad morning was funny, then add in smoldering Tom covered in roses, and the kiss at the end was simple and charming. I also liked how you added the little bit of background into this, where their 'relationship' had started. Usually people forget that and I'm like... that was random. I liked it very much. Thank you for posting this darling! With Love and Admiration Anonymous |
| Pharies chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 I love this, but your time line seems just a bit off since Hermione was older than everyone else. If she did university for four years, she should be at least 23. If she met Tom at Uni and they wrote books together for five years then she should be around 24 or 25, depending on when they published books. That's the only real issue I saw with it. I love the concept. I love how well you captured her flustered-ness around him and how he's even colder than Malfoy. That's perfect ) Tori |
| Nerys chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 Hi, *sniggers* I really had a good time at Hermione's misfortune at the start of your fic. It was really funny, and just one of those days when everything goes wrong that makes it so recognisable and infuriatingly funny. Really enjoyed how you wrote Tom in this one; he's not a nice person, so you can still see Riddle-ish traits, while he's not evil either, so it fits this romantic oneshot. Your style of writing is getting better, too. Much more fluent and cohesive than before. I had fun reading this. Thank you for participating in the challenge, xoxox Nerys |
| Bway-Girl25 chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 I LOVE IT! Tom is just too smexy! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 It's nice to read a happy Tomione for once! Great work! |
| Yira chapter 1 . 8/31/2014 Aww... hiddenCrushOnMione!Tom |
| articcat621 chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 Squeeee. Ohhh, I just melted while reading this. Loved that Tom made a move! The flowers were a sweet gesture. |
