Cute!

I love it.

Great job.

So cute, my gosh. I seriously love how Bumi and Lin started arguing about whether she was pretty or not like a bunch of five year olds. I swear, Bumi brings out the child in everybody he interacts with, and I absolutely love that about him.

This was fantastic! I really liked Lin's outburst, it was written very well, hit me in the chest real hard. Amazing job, well done.

Aww, this was so adorable and sweet! You did a really great job and I'd love to see some more Linumi from you.

be still my heart i'm hardly breathing
God this is so precious. I'm in love with how you write these two. Please keep up the amazing work.

Hardly noticed him using Katara's name. Hm. As for reworded sentences pm me and be more specific curious is all.

Besides some spelling mistakes and a few sentences that can be reworded, I just have one thing to nitpick: Why is Bumi referring to his mother by her name? Otherwise, it is a very sweet story, and I can also just imagine the ribbing Lin would get from Toph about this. Just one reason I'd love to see Linumi become canon.

Aww it's so adorable TT this needs to happen! U also must write more!

Almost any Lin fic is a good fic! She's just amazing that way.
It doesn't need to be funny. Obviously it's nice to have humour but don't worry about how funny it is because the fictions can be just as good if they have a more serious tone. There seems to be a bit of a Linumi craze at the moment but I agree, any Linumi fiction is needed desperately. Great work!

I loved it. Its one of the best and cutests linumi stories out there

Love it! I hope to see more linumi fics from you! They are awesome!

This was enjoyable, and very well written. You should make more, these are great.

Amazing fic! Could you be tempted to continue it, oh fellow zelda fan? :)