This was nice :))

So cute
Keep on the writes

like this

Haha, Luffy rules! :)

I could see the lovebirds jumping hearing Luffy's voice xD
That was cute. And the caaake :3 I want to rufle young arco's hair while he eats, I don't know why. He's adorable there.
Thank you!

This story just draws the reader in, it was a sweet and entertaining story.I really really loved it! Is there any chance you would want to expand it and continue the story? As I would live to read more

Hi! This is cute! I've read stories with this plot and I always feel queasy when one lets the other into their home because, let's face it, no one in real life will do that. But hey, how would the story proceed if that doesn't happen? XD This is the cutest because it's MarcoAce! *dreamy look*

No problems with the writing, though there were some typos here and there. I like the slow development as well as how you managed to keep everyone in character. And I'd like to give Luffy a hug for what he did!

Overall, this is a fun read! Thank you very much for writing! I loved it!

Ihihihihihi I liked this
I'm glad Ace didn't steal anything from Marco c':
ashdjashd I loved the Fire Dancing I saw lots of videos a while ago and even did my own fire poi lol But i still don't set it on fire, nope, that'd be a really bad idea.(?)

I like the way you write Luffy Everytime i read him in some fics they write him as an idiot that just think about food :I I don't like that. Luffy is far from an idiot, he's pretty clever and observant, he rather enjoys his life and doesn't pay atention to those little details that could ruin your day uvu At least thats what i think 8)

Thank you for writing and sharing this
Ciao

Okay, so I finally read it and I love it :D Lovely story and I love the way Ace and Luffy did their show, without the stealing part, ofc. And Marco to the rescue :D Thank you very much for participating

I love it, really :3
this was so awesome and lovely, thanks for this.

That was really nice! I loved the slow build up and how Marco gained Ace's rust bit by bit. :)
Luffy's solution to their problem was very sweet.
Thank you for writing this fic!

Geez, I feel so bad for taking so long to review. I was planning on doing it a long time ago, but it didn't happen and then I kinda forgot I had read it but not reviewed XP My bad. But anyway, I loved this! And I recognized the beginning! It was part of your one-shots for the MarcoAce week, right? I didn't connect each story to each author, since there were so many, but I remember I did want to see more of it. Glad I was able to now -

The dance at the beginning was marvelous to imagine and their sneakiness is always great to see in use XD Marco and Ace's relationship was built slowly and it was great seeing them realising slowly they had developed feelings for each other. The parallel between Marco's past and Ace and Luffy's life was a nice touch to add.

How they discovered Ace had narcolepsy was quite fun, but helped in the end when Luffy had to talk with Marco. I liked how he noticed they liked each other, but they didn't XD And Ace being awake when Marco confessed was just...! *-* I seriously loved everything about the ending, really!

All in all, I really loved this fic :D (sorry for this review being so big, I kinda get too excited and want to talk about most of the things I liked when I review XP) It was definitely worth the wait!

aww love it, so cute XD

Funny, when I was twelve, I saw a show like that and wrote about it too...its a nice memory you brought up!
I like the way Luffy behaves in the whole story, and about Marco and Ace...well, what can I say?
You made them as loveable as they are ;)
Great story!

I was really excited to see you decided to extend the performance drabble. Your story is the longest oneshot of the month, so thank you for that and for participating in general