ITS BEEN 3 YEARS SINCE YOU UPDATED PLZ UPDATE!

so good

HE KILLED CAPTAIN KENNY! YOU BASTARD!
*claps* GJ m8, really good on the easter eggs eh?

South Park Reference, GIVE ME MY COOKIE! Though there are still some blurry stuff. You are slowly turning this story in the right direction.

Yay! You're back! And with you came back my need to check for new AoT stories!
I'll be taking that cookie and leaving back my "THIS IS A SOUTH PARK REFERENCE" ticket i always keep around in case i need them.

This story is an abomination. Your characters are atrocious, your characters' reasoning abilities are a joke, and your grammer is far below the satisfactory level. Forgive my harshness, but this story is rubbish. You need to revise and rework the plot, and you need to give your characters better reasons to do what they do. You should work on developing your characters. The story has potential, but it won't reach that potential in it's current form. You failed to give a satisfactory reason for Eren siding with the people responsible for the brutal death of his mother. A character that dedicated to seeking justice wouldn't just forgive Reiner, Annie, and Bertolt so easily. The shifters were responsible for the deaths of countless innocent men, women, and children. Their ends don't justify the means. You need to make the characters easier to sympathize with if you want to turn them into protagonists. Rewrite the story with this in mind and it's sure to be interesting.

Your story has some major problem: you've turned all the main characters into monsters! No hero would side with the Titan shifters outside the wall. Their methods involved the slaughter of innocent men, women, and children. It doesn't matter that the king is corrupt, because the Titan shifters are just as bad. The end doesn't justify the means. Furthermore, you'v made the main characters to quick to turn on their own people. It makes them appear detached from those they once fought to protect, which makes less sympathetic as a character. Your integration of modern technology into the story is also a problem. It doesn't really fit in with the setting, and it seems tacked on. Finally, your grammar and format need work. While the idea of a winged Titan is interesting, these problems take away from my enjoyment of the story.

Holy crap.. o-o
compared to your stories from the past, your stories have become much more human and believable. (and intense, the hype is too real)
keep it up :D

UPDATE PLEASEEEEEE!

NO! DOT! NOT YOUUUUUuuuuuu!

I like this. A lot. 'specially the idea of a flying Titan
Please continue!

Blowing an hand off of bertholdt?! That's insane! Ad long as his flesh has the density of paper, that's still a lot of power to just destroy it with a punch! Anyway, don't worry: if you are going to not update this daily, that souls make you half human. Just keep the good story up!

*me reading* Okay... Eren and Spade, now proved. Convenient twin brother is convenient. Giants of Hell and all. Shifter assassin that... Smiles... You motherfucker!

Every chapter gets thus story on always different levels of goodness. Will you ever do a normale chapter? Will you ever transform this into a normal story and not a cliffhanger festa? 'Cause that souls suck. This si such a great story.

YES! Now, to the PLOT PROGRESSION OUT OF THE CANON PART!