Excellent story, told by a true author. Job WELL DONE.

really liked this and would love to see more - keep writing!

I actually like how fragmented it is, it's kinda poetic, you know? I was expecting a 'ahh, being a god is so cool!' fic but I think this is closer to how things actually would have been if Percy had become a god. I really liked this, good job.

This is one of the most insightful stories I've read in a while. I always wondered what would happen if Percy accepted immortality, and if Annabeth would become a Hunter. The way you described Percy as a god seemed so realistic. I think Percy would be a god that always tried to follow the mortal world and help demigods in times of need. This was really great!

Wow... Usually I don't like 'Percy becomes a god' fics, but this one was really good! I wish you would have continued with it, but its amazing as it is! Great work!
NightSand

Omg my heart :o this is seriously good well done /curls up into a corner and dies/

This is one of the saddest, most heartbreaking, and most beautiful stories I have ever read. I would have loved to read a whole story, but the fragmented narration still works really well. It's amazing.