Reviews for The Law of Proximal Attraction
Hannah L-Sama chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Wow. This story is amazing! Love it, can't wait for more!
Hime chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
The plot is so interesting!Make everyone the ghost(except shin)and they all gather to shin for some warmth and company -w-
KidTantei chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
holy shit. This is intense, so so intense. The idea and the plot you've set up is brilliant, and I'm really in love with this AU so far, especially with how you've written it. Your Shintaro has great snark and I'm just so in awe at how you blend that with the other side of Shintaro that dwells on his regrets. I love how you introduce characters and details in - I love the scene with Ene, and I love how you brought in the lifespans. (Although, if Momo's is 1559, shouldn't that be 3:59 PM instead of AM?)
When you have time, just check over the chapter again, because there were some spelling errors (which are okay because you're on iPad. That's totally understandable, haha)...

Other than that, though, this chapter was so engaging and edge-of-the-seat-worthy. The way you've formatted it (uh, for lack of better description) and the way you've plotted out the scenes is part of what makes it so gripping (the other part probably being Shintaro's narration). I just. This is brilliant. I can't wait to see where you take this. Keep up your great work; and have fun in Dubai! :D
Liberamente chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
This is very interesting albeit a tad confusing. I love the idea about Shintaro with Shinigami eyes and becomes Ghost Magnet (?) Please update soon! o
Nythtak chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
This is pretty interesting so far and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
Mafia-sama chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Oh my... this is pretty awesome!
It's always just seeing numbers or seeing ghosts, but Shintaro's badass cause he got them both. lol
Well I don't know if it's rude to ask but...Does AllShin Means Boys X Shintaro or girls X Shintaro or both x Shintaro XD (well for me that nee-Shintaro will never top) lol
Waiting for next chap! so hurry up I'm dying here. 3
Anon-san chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
At first I thought Shintaro was telling Kenjirou about Ayano's death and I was like.
Wow I can't believe you rely on a friend of your daughter to tell you she died when the boy hadn't met her in 2 years...
And then I read it over 4 times and it was k. lol
I liked how Kenjirou was described as creepy dad always in a lab coat c:
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I feel like Haruka/Hiyori are the obv candidates as dead people. Haruka tries to focus lots so he can doodle and Hiyori just stares at trucks/cats/follows Hibiya around :c
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Kokoshin is life and love. c:
Kizuka chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
Please show the death scene for Kano Kido and Seto! XD if possible ahah can all of them be ghosts too? Though I'm guessing that is going to be part of your plan :)
I hope you post the next chap soon! I really like this idea xD good luck! :)