| Reviews for Beyond the Veil |
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   Avidreader212 chapter 10 . 7/28 Somehow the last few chapters see very Crack-y. I read the whole chapter thinking at the end that I was going to be am Omake because the tone does not match the rest of the story. I think I’m done here. It’s still interesting don’t get me wrong but it is just not going in the direction I though. Thanks for the story and happy writing! |
| Kian Xki chapter 7 . 6/7 did Sasuke/Sirius forget to release Tsunami? |
| FrikFrakTikTak chapter 11 . 10/18/2019 This is the chapter that I leave. |
| ayleid chapter 8 . 10/10/2019 The story is entertaining, but magical cores and even the suggestion of magical reserves is pure fanon so you should not worry too much about it. |
| matther12 chapter 4 . 4/4/2019 By this logic Ron should be the most powerful wizard ever born. |
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 5 . 2/16/2019 huh. |
| ArghThePirate chapter 12 . 6/30/2018 Hey! Great story here! I love it! PlEaSe do update soon though, I REALLY want to read more! Thanks and please keep up the great work! |
| ismellitblue chapter 1 . 2/7/2016 This is amazing, I hope Sasuke/ sirius gets to turn into padfoot. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/11/2015 Never did get back ASAP. it was an interesting story. |
| einargs chapter 12 . 11/27/2015 This is really awesome, though I felt that the quality declined a bit near the end. Orochimaru was absolutely hilarious, and I'm totally stealing the volunteer bit. Having Harry walking around was very interesting, though I kind of wish we had gotten to see how he affected Gaara more. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 9/24/2015 This story has a major problem. It's boring as hell. The first few chapters of a story need to be able to grab a reader, make them want to read more. But with the way you are writing this, it's just so easy to skip most of a paragraph, because you have the nasty habit of going on about stuff that isn't important. |
| EveJHoang chapter 12 . 6/15/2015 ... I absolutely love this story... *o* |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/1/2015 i can see that of young sirius but not of post azkaban serious :P no idea why but i don't think he is that naive anymore |
| scorpioneldar chapter 12 . 6/1/2015 wow that was just ... wow i don't know how to react to that and Sirius breaks out good move man i am amused by your writing and glad Naruto is not dead.. it is kinda impossible for me to keep going if you kill him off at this point he can be killed off just not while Sirius is basing his identity partially off of his friendship with the kid |
| scorpioneldar chapter 8 . 5/31/2015 i thought it was like a mana pool kinda like building tear in league of legends every time you cast your mana pool increases so you start having to fight in short but powerful bursts and end not having to care about mana any more because your pool is so deep you effectively don't run out except in the most extreme of circumstances |
