Great story please make a squeal

This is traumatising to an extent, the detail of Orochimaru's suffering is kinda of daunting. Despite everything he did, I dislike his position since Danzo was far more worse and cruel than he was (in my opinion). However, despite being unsettling it is a good storyline.

damn I love this fic so much. antimainstream and good to read.

I really loved this fanfiction! It's sad I finished it in one day TTTT but whatever! I liked the ending and it fit certainly well with the overall storyline of the entire thing. I'll be sure to reread this lots because ohmaigod it was amazing!

wow that was really reallly good nicely done

LOL I'm happy the way it ended!

Noooo...! It can't be all done! *wails* Damn like Orochi said...you broke your promise, but then again just like he said...so did he. Though he had every right to, being that everyone he trusted betrayed him. *frowns* Very good story, sad it's over but loved it all the same. *smiles*

Damn it...just when he was free from them. Damn Jiraiya
What the hell are you going to do now, you DO have a promise to keep.

Oh my god...Orochi is so kawaii when drunk! I love him...*laughs*

LOL Drunk Orochimaru is funny LOL

I wish I reviewed more! I need to get back on track!

Oh my god...Orochi had me laughing, what a genius! *smiles* That's what Jiraiya gets, putting Orochimaru through all this. Poor Orochi getting confused for a whore...but I guess that's what happens when you go to shady places like that with a guy like Jiraiya and being rather beautiful for a man.

What the hell Jiraiya...are you trying to help Orochimaru or get him killed? You save him from Danzo only to then say that you are returning to the village and he has no choice but to follow, lest you use force. And what is up with that strange man; what does he want with Orochi? Already know he can't be trusted either...

Jiraiya you better not let anything happen to Orochimaru, so far your word means nothing. And keep that ass away from him, Danzo too he needs to keep away as you promised.

This is so great! I need to get better about reviewing again..