Nice... Senpai!

By The Why next senpai...!

Really good story. I hope that maybe you make another chapter in the future. :)

All events are canon with the addition of Naruto. Nothing new, nothing exciting. His existence didnt change any vents.

Please update your story

... Sad... I was wanting to read this...

Will Naruto join the straw hat pirates in the future?

That was a great set-up and something hody jones would absolutely do.

Keep up the amazing plot twist and I hope to see where you take it from here.

GL and I definitely look forward to reading more.

Wow what an update. Great way to have naruto set up. I really enjoyed it and how he now has to get stronger. I was wondering how close he was to the royal family in this story? Also, how long will it take for him to return to fishman island? I really want to see how he deals with all of it when he returns. Keep up the great work and I hope you update really soon!

Really touching chapter please update another chapter soon!

by hung man do you mean endowment very muscled or a few others

Good story! Keep it up! You have found a fan in me!

Another dark start from naruto. Dam those world nobels. Do like th freed naruto idea.

This is a cool story. I loved it.

After leaving Fishman Island, I hope you write down part he'll meet with Silvers Rayleigh where he'll teach Naruto the three forms of Haki in order to become a symbol of hope. Silvers Rayleigh will take Naruto to Rusukaina where he will spend many years developing his abilities. Also, if you changed your mind, I got idea of what kind of Devil fruit power Naruto should had, that may be very effective for his Fishman Karate skills. I called it the Yoroi Yoroi no mi (Armor Armor Fruit).

The Yoroi Yoroi no mi (Armor Armor Fruit) is a Paramecia Class Devil Fruit that gives the user the ability to generate an energy armor around their body, selected or whole. The durability of the energy armor is immensely strong and impenetrable, allowing the user to easily withstand tremendously powerful attacks and survived in extremely aggressive environments. The energy armor greatly augmented the user’s physical strength and greatly supports and augments the concussive force behind the user extraordinarily offensive attacks. The user can shape the form of his armor to any kind of form he’d imagined or expand his armor, importantly strengthening and increasing its size and shape around her, though the user’s own body remains the same at its center.

With this fruit’s powers, Naruto won’t worry about not begin able to swim underwater as he can shape an armor around his body that will allows him to swim effectively. Also he can use the fruit’s power to developed techniques like Mangekyō Sharingan’s Susanoo. Can you imagine a Perfect Susanoo, matching the size of a giant like Oars or Oars Jr., capable of using Fishman Karate, yet at a vast and deadly level?

I’m not the type to tries to tell you what to do with your story, I suggested it was good idea and I thought I should share it with you. Also, I hope that you had Naruto joined the Straw Hat pirates in future chapters.

Well its certainly interesting, hope you update soon

great chapter