Reviews for The Uncle From America
Shall-Iin chapter 4 . 5/23
Closets are built into the room. They can not physically be moved from one place to another. You ate talking about a cabinet or a wardrobe of some kind. it is very annoying.
I Ship Spidey-pool chapter 9 . 4/20
may what ever Alain did never be forgotten
R.I.P
I Ship Spidey-pool chapter 4 . 4/17
come on down to the olive garden and get ya free bread stick!
Guest chapter 11 . 2/14
Wish you had not deleted the summary for the rest of this story. The person who 'took it over' has done NOTHING with it and deprived us all of at least reading a summary of the rest of the story.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/14
Well, just looked at the author who adopted this story and found it still ends at ch11 with apparently few changes - two years after being adopted. i think it is actually shorted than your version and zero story development. i think you should withdraw your permission for this story to be 'adopted'. i was so disappointed that it was still 11 chapters long.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/14
I think hermione would have written 'i got all Os on the assignments', as As at hogwarts are a bare pass.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/14
/why didn't harry receive the letters hermione had paid 7 dollars for him to receive?
Guest chapter 6 . 2/14
I know its not really germaine to your ongoing plot but i can't help worrying and wanting to know what was done about hermione's inheritance, belongings and home. it wasn't clear who now owned the property and everything else in the estate (i suspect the uncle as the parents died intestate - why did you do that? - and in those circumstances it all goes to the siblings and parents). Hermione suggested renting it out, an excellent suggestion which would provide and income which could support hermione until she graduates and she may want the house at some point if the uncle doesn't want it, but the uncle didn't deliver a clear decision. A maddening loose end.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/14
Where you have written 'stack' you mean 'stash'. A stack is a vertical pile of things, tall and thin. A stash is a collection of things hidden (stashed) away.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/14
I just have to comment that you keep writing 'her school furniture' when I think you mean 'her school things'. Furniture refers to beds, wardrobes, tables, chairs, armchairs and sofas.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14
Wow! This is really intriguing. Great beginning.
FireDragon's flame chapter 12 . 2/13
I was really enjoying this story. I am bummed that you are not continuing this. I always thought if the movies start sucking write what you want to see. but I admit it is hard if you feel unmotivated if you are considering writing more of this i would like to encourage you.
RonRR chapter 7 . 9/30/2019
Really, Steve or Bucky? I didn't guess either one of them to be pedophiles.

For pairing, Harry Potter by preference, but if you want an Avengers match the Peter Parker is a possibility. He is at least close to her age. May actually be younger at the moment since you are set 3 years before the first movie.

Thank you for writing,

Ron
fairylover2004 chapter 7 . 8/31/2019
i really want a dramione...
Cassie-011 chapter 12 . 5/29/2019
I hope soon you continue on with this, ive really enjoyed it!
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