I went back and reread this story, because I remembered enjoying it when you first wrote it. It's lovely! The only flaw is the typos scattered throughout each chapter. There are too many to list them all, but one stood out on this reading because it changes the meaning of the sentence: In Chapter 3, I think the word "over" was missing from "he was never getting this woman".

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I'm just gonna say that this was wonderfully done. After the sad ending of Book 3, it is a nice take-off of it even if Book 4 is nothing like this. I am a big Makorra fan too, so it was a nice read!

I think this is a great ending, and that ending it makes sense. There were a few typos like extra apostrophes, and the word "dirty" instead of "dirt". Also, Mako's never been shown wearing gloves that have fingertips, so I was confused when that was mentioned.

I'm glad, as Mako is, that he waited until Korra had healed by herself, instead of trying to rekindle things when she was so needy. They both need to be clearheaded to make decisions about love and living situations.

I really like that Tonraq appeared in this chapter, expressed his love for Korra, and showed that he subtly but sincerely approves of Mako. This whole thing was wonderful.

This is so amazing! I loved it!

Amazing! so beautiful, loved how you made Korra joke about staying in the Southpole so Korra. Again, the way you treat makorra with so much respect! so beautiful :)

Hey, I'm glad to see you continued this!

What was supposed to follow "It was nearly dinnertime, but when they got back"?

Really great read, loved the simplicity and dialogue. Thanks!

Love the Makorra! Written in a mature and realistic way, such a joy to read :)

This is great! Can't wait to see what you post next!

Wow, thought this was very nice and also well thought out/realistic. Great job!

Very thorough and carefully written to be in character. I've read a lot of fanfics about the aftermath of season 3 involving mako and korra and this was the most consistently in character. The writing was fluid, albeit with a few typos, and made me feel like I was watching an actual episode. Great job! Would love to read more about Korra from you.

Hi! This story was really awesome! I liked it! I would love to read more from you! I heard Janet/David and Sashell in my mind like it was an episode of Book 4!

I must say, this is beautifully written, I loved it.
I think you should consider continuing this

GODDAMMIT ASAMI THEY WERE ABOUT TO UGH

Really, really pretty. You had a few typos, but sometimes they just escape your notice, right? I would go back and just edit those out if you could. :) Other than that, very pretty writing. Very original concepts and very beautiful execution.