This is by far the most interesting and unique Doctor who fanfiction I have ever read it so easily expands on the universe of doctor who and truly makes it something new but also closely related to the original content I can already tell that I am going to throughout invest all my time on shipping terna and the doctor together they are absolutely adorable

Hope to read more soon.

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When are you going to update

Why did you skip the Crusade and The Space Museum?

If you wanted to show the feelings of more than one character why didn't you write it in 3rd person instead of doing mutiple chapters that are the same in 1st person?

Oh no, I've caught up! Now it is time to play the waiting game...

The info about her soul is good to know for the future. What are you going to do about the lost episodes?

Imagine Terna's reaction had she been caught and auctioned off as a slave! Lyall royalty being sold to humans, I cant even imagine.

It's a long way off, but I am super stoked to see how Terna takes the Doctor's regeneration after how she dealt with Susan's departure.

You probably are sick of my reviews by now, and I am not usually this consistent with reviews, but I saw how few reviews you had for such a well written story and thought you deserved more. (no matter how bad at reviewing I am)

Now that I only have a couple of chapters left before I have to start playing the waiting game I thought I should give you a decently thought out review. Overall, your grammar and spelling is good and do not detract from the story at all. The spacing and lay out of the paragraphs and chapters make it easy to read, which is always a big plus in my book. The pacing of the story has improved greatly now that you are really condensing the chapters down and have somewhat established your character. Terna is also a fairly original OC; she didnt come from our world, she isnt a long lost time lord, and she isnt replacing any pre-existing character by simply taking their lines. You, my dear author, have spent some time in making something unique, and I for one appreciate that. I am in it for the long haul, so I hope you keep updating.

(P.S. It is not my intention for you to take any of this as flaming criticism. I had to disable my messages after an author took a review I wrote poorly. I only review stories I like, so I would never send anyone flames.)

Terna has really grown as a person since the first chapter, but she is still learning about the realities of life. And I believe it was Susan who gave Terna her name, so she will always have that to remember Susan by.

On a different note, I am almost out of chapters!

Well, you've made me properly excited for the next chapter

It's good to know the Doctor improves his driving somewhat in the future. And on to season 2!

You know, I actually sort of imagined her as an older Nicole Kidman! But if you combined her with Helen Mirren. Great chapter, this story is really moving along now!

I drink wine out of coffee mugs, so I cannot judge milkshakes in wine glasses. I'm impressed with the way you condensed down that serial into one chapter. And that was quite a leap in episodes, so I guess that answers my earlier question. Great chapter, sorry if my reviews are cruddy.

So many questions have been answered! It's interesting to see how you weave your own story into the preexisting. I hope she gets retribution for her people. And does this mean she can regenerate as well?

Does she know something, or is it just a feeling? On to the next serial