Ooh this one was especially wonderful! So sweet... Thank you!

Delightful...although I hated that they are not ready to be a couple. I think you did an excellent job describing their emotions and the turmoil they are dealing with in their relationship. I look forward to your next installment.

Absolutely beautiful.

I really like how you have put her in the position of setting the limit - that she values his friendship so much that she is reluctant to move the relationship forward without being certain it will survive the moment (the wonderful! moment) of them really connecting sexually and romantically - I love also their different perspectives and how you reconnect them through the windows at the end. thanks!

Beautifully written but it doesn't really make sense unless something is going to happen that makes her realise that they can be both friends and lovers. His reluctance to come to her has always been the sticking point rather than the other way around. I am sure you have something interesting planned so that any more meetings between them will not just be more of the same as nothing in the stories or the TV had them doing anything in particular different. Curiouser and curiouser.