Where did chap 12 go?

last 4 lines...me: *Gasping for air* :'D

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what's going on

Ok, as promised in previous chapter review.

Like all writers, keep practicing. You set a clear goal, and you kept to it, which shows a strong desire for continuity. The overarching goal made sense, and was believable. That's pretty much what writing is, when you boil it down to its essence.

The actual theme and setting wasn't exactly in my area of interest, but you were able to present something cohesive. No matter what you're writing about, keep doing these things and you're winning though.

Write more, when you get a chance.

Ok, I saw your link on a reddit thread. I was going to wait until the end to review the whole thing in one go, but I wanted to take a moment here.

"That is Ramu, we use him for tight spaces."

Your timing and delivery of this line was spot on. I was going to dismiss it at first, but it put me in mind of R'as being condescending to Sportsmaster and it fell into place. Nice gag, which doesn't detract from your story.

I love it so far. I know young justice is canacelled . But I would love to see artemis iccle jr fanfis

Good job!

Bad! Bad witch boy! Go take your cat and stuff it up your- *glances at Robin* there are children present, so I'll just say doo hole. But seriously, leave well enough alone, will you? (Also, interesting -if a bit short- chapter! Keep 'em coming!)

jon snow lives

I love this story finally a story like can please put more jason and artemis

Lolz "Nyx" for Batman's protege? Nice. But make sure you stick to one spelling (you started with Nyx but ended with Nix)

I love it,please continue writing! :D

Just in case you forgot, Alfred has a strict "no uniforms upstairs" rule. Not even The Batman dares to disobey Agent A.

This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!