Chosen Witch? Easy... HERMIONE

Location? McGonagall's Office, after hours

Adjective? Flustered. Needy. Stressed.

Hermione is working too hard. Like Daphne, she's in pain because of her book-bag and going up and down the stairs all day, every day. Harry finds her, almost screaming in pain in the Transfiguration hallway, after-hours. She's got a leg-cramp and needs his help. He pulls her into the closest office... McGonagall's, and all but tosses her on top of Minerva's desk. Hermione's in too much pain to complain and doesn't say anything when Harry strips her of her clothes, down to her plain, white-cotton, bikini-knickers (witches don't wear bras!) and then sets to work relieving her cramp and all of her other muscle-aches. Soon, Hermione's needing a different kind of healing, which Harry provides, in-between kisses and his quiet disclosure that he loves her, which she almost misses hearing. Neither Harry nor Hermione realize that McGonagall is in her cat-form, watching them from the corner. She's too happy about winning the teacher betting-pool to be mad at the fact that the Head Boy and Girl are screwing on her desk. Desks, after all, can be cleaned!

Good. Thanks

Hermiona
Francja

Eh I don't think the heir of a magical house would be able to have a lover makes her spoiled goods after all

Luna

So who is the girl?

An excellent and hot three-shot here! Very well written!

Chosen Witch: Hermione Granger
Location: Hogwarts Library
Adjective to describe my chosen witch: Book-lover

Who is his woman...

Chosen Witch : Hermione Granger

Location : Gryffindor Girls Rooms

Adjective : NEWT stress relief

This was well-written and perfectly paced, with just the right amount of set-up and teasing before the main event.

I have two criticisms, however.

Firstly, I think a description of Daphne fairly early on in the story would be useful. We don't even know what colour her hair is until you mention her pubic hair lol.

Secondly, I think the story would have been better with a slightly more canonical/human Harry. I get that this is essentially PWP, but there's a reason why I'm reading HP fanfiction and not some generic erotica. The best smut, while a fantasy, has a sense of realism to it. Realism makes the events feel more immediate, less like a dream. Of course if you make it too realistic then you get bogged down in justifying events, but there's a balance to be had, I think. "Sex god Harry" is just a bit too far into fantasy and away from reality for my taste.

For a good example of the "realism/fantasy" balance, I recommend "Whatever Happened to Bromance?" by vlad the inhaler.

As for requests:

Chosen witch: Pansy Parkinson

Location: Hogwarts graduation party.

Adjective: hour-glass.

awesome story
love it

Chosen Witch:Luna Lovegood
Location:Forbidden Forest
Adjective:Maddening

Chosen witch: Susan Bones or better yet Amelia Bones
Location: Room of requirement or as they say the come and go room
Description: lustfull

Very well done, as always. As for what I would like to see next.

Chosen Witch: Luna

Location: Forbidden Forest clearing

Adjective to describe the chosen witch: Eccentric

Really good chapter.

gunny