LOL! thank you for the prononceation! even though i can speak Japanese fluently,it is still helpful! GREAT STORY! STANDING OVATION!

one of my favorite fanfics I have read! Loved it

:)! CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! MOOOOOOOORRRRREEEE!

You have such great brother fics. And I love the mixture of Japanese in them. Shows that while American, they have deep roots in a place they've never seen and a culture that draws them together when one language does not convey enough.

I really love your stories! You've gotten to the heart of the turtles...no matter what or how they disagree, they are always there for each other. I don't know why some reviewers keep saying the guys are OOC...I've been a fan since the comics first came out! I've read most of them and see all the movies, and the despite how much Leo and Raph argue and fight, they are best friends and very close. I think you've shown that perfectly. I just wish the new movie could've shown the same.

Great job and so looking forward to more!

This is a sweet story.

I love your brother-bonding moments with Leo and Raph... I wonder if they were very close when they were younger. If you can, you should also write one-shots/stories of when they were turtle-tots/hatchlings (when they were kids/infants) and show how much their bond was to one another when they instantly knew they were brothers (Examples: Like, when one of them, possibly Leo, helped the other learn how to walk for the first time, or of Raph trying to get Leo to speak his first word).
Anyway, can't wait to see more brother-bonding moments from you!

Ok.. first off I have to get this out.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW! KAWAIIIIIIIIIII!
ahem.. now that thats over.
So for the technical junk.. Again excellent writing style. Good use of language and good capture of the guys mannerisms and speech patterns.
Good grammar, good spelling.. over all technically perf.
Story wise...
Did i mention just how DAMM KAWAII This is!
OMG i just love it! so adorbs!
Keep em coming girl!

Wow. I like this one shot, probably one of my favourite ones that you've written so far.
I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work. ;)

Great little snippet I adore the bro interaction. I only wish we saw raph helping out Leo once he was ill. But the last line made me smile..
U should consider doing some multi chapter stories sure you would do great..