| Reviews for Asura's Will |
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   SkullRaid chapter 1 . 12/30/2019 Listen here FUCKFACE YOU CANT JUST LEAD ME ON LIKE THAT YOU FUCKIN TEASE DONT LEAVE THIS STORY UNFINISHED YOU BASTARD! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/17/2019 Cliffhanger is great and all, but if you don't even updating is ridiculous! what's the point? making someone angry? being an asshole? |
| storybrooke38248 chapter 10 . 9/8/2019 tobirama/naruto |
| Wika0304 chapter 15 . 8/30/2019 please update, it's great |
| SKitsuneDragon chapter 15 . 1/1/2019 MORE! You need to come back and write more. |
| stardust655 chapter 15 . 9/14/2018 oh wow! amazing story. please continue though. Itama is sooo adorable! Um... just gonna follow this template-thingie I guess... Likes: I love the drama! Naruto and Hashirama want to achieve peace, and somehow Madara agrees. They all dream of peace, even though they are enemies... then when they find out the truth... oh god. That part... a bit annoying for me cuz... well, ya know they fight... -_- but it's inevitable! And it just adds to the drama and makes it so exciting, you know? lol Dislikes: um... honestly? nothing really. love this story! Overall Comments: AWESOME! Please continue... :( why did u stop? wait ARE YOU DISCONTINUING THIS? NU |
| Arisu003 chapter 15 . 8/21/2018 Your cliffhangers are killing me! I don’t know who I ship Naruto with more to be honest? Madara, Hashirama, Izuna, or Tobirama? That last one would be a tough one, but whatever. I see it happening. I really want to see the backlash of all of this. Will they start to wonder how sHE SUMMONED A TAILED BEAST OUT OF THIS AIR? Or her clones, and rasengan, and hiraishin. Also, what’s up with the roads? She hasn’t signed the contract yet has she? |
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/20/2018 1/10. The grammar's okay, but the characterization isn't. Naruto doesn't act like the adult she is. Your Naruto is a hopeless optimist who probably doesn't have enough braincells to rub together. Even canon!Naruto knows that peace can't be achieved by just acting like a martyr Mary Sue who somehow wants to accomplish things by doing nothing but talk. Life doesn't work like that. 'specially in this era. Additionally, the wounds are still fresh. How'd you feel if one day, an outsider appears and starts spewing "PEACE" and "FORGIVENESS" shit just months after your parents died? Weeks after your friends got slaughtered? Days after nameless people of YOUR clan were lost? Not to mention they grew up, taught that they should HATE rival clans. Children were taught to treat conflict like their staple fucking diet. That's not something you can change in such a short period of time. Even the anime's Senju-Uchiha reconcilation didn't work like that. They had to weather the hate with more deaths before both parties became too tired to fight and agreed on peace, and even then, their rivalry was still going strong within the walls of Konoha. Hell, the worldwide peace Naruto achieved was built on the blood shed during the 4th Shinobi World War. Peace isn't a thing you can have w/o incentive. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/20/2018 Transplanted eyes can't be deactivated though. :/ And their medical stuff weren't so advanced in the Warring Clans era. (So I doubt people know it can be transplanted.) They only started revolutionizing iryo-jutsu during, the, um, 2nd Shinobi World War, I think? |
| Anaelyssa chapter 2 . 5/20/2018 hmm... |
| Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 5/20/2018 An interesting intro. |
| LunaUchiha20 chapter 15 . 4/29/2018 UPDATE PLEASE! |
| kazuki2292 chapter 15 . 4/11/2018 next chapter please |
| Shadow.nao chapter 15 . 12/31/2017 Please update soon! |
| black cat shiki chapter 15 . 8/17/2017 It's so sad but I need more! |
