Heartbreaking and well written. Hard read but worth it

That was beautiful thank you for sharing.

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Deep, captivating, absolutely enchanting. You truly know how to capture the character's emotions through perfectly thought out words, not giving the reader a chance to lose interest

I am so happy that you wrote this for your griend. I know what it is like to have someone you love die. And I guess that you know it too, since there was so much raw emotion in it. I hope you write just like this.
Love, Fanvergence_101

This is such a touching story, and I actually started crying when I read it. That never happens to me. My heart goes out to you, really. I know that by now, you’ve probably made peace with this, or maybe you haven’t, but always know that you are an incredibly strong person.

I'm crying.
That's all I can say.

Probably the bes 4th oneshot i have read..

I’m not gonna say sorry for ur loss because I have nothing to be sorry about all I say is I give my pity even though u don’t want it

I know how hard it is to lose someone who's been there since day one. It hurts. It really, really hurts. I love your writing. I'm sure that this story opened up many hearts!

Wow. Just...wow. This is an amazing piece of work. The Author's Note made me tear up. Seriously. If I could write like you can, I'd be rich. But words are much more precious then money. Thank you for this beautiful fanfic.

I cried at the end of this.. you are such an awesome writer! You put so much emotion into your writing and I admire it so much!

please carry on I want to see Jonathan pay!

This was such a heart breaking story and I am so glad you shared yours with us too. I am so touched by this and I cannot say how much this meant to me, to read this. Do thank you for writing this story, it was amazing.

Wow, I loved the story but reading ur note at the end talking about your friend is what is causing the tears streaming down my face right now. Beautiful story and I'm so sorry for your loss.