I’ve enjoyed your story throughly.

Um. I feel like Hermione should have reacted a bit more strongly to almost being raped? Like she just kinda shrugged it off? That's not what happens...?

This a good story. The premise is interesting and the mystery element made me want to read more. However, you should consider having this story editted/beta'ed. Typographical errors, continuity problems and incomplete sentences are plenty. There are a lot of "HUH?! " portion in your story.

You did a great job, even the 'm' was great.

This was very good, loved it from the beginning to the end.

Overall this story was confusing. It felt at times like it was written by several people who weren't communicating. The characters personalities and feelings would change from chapter to chapter. This was barely SSHG they spent so much time apart from each other.

So I'm enjoying this story I am. But to enjoy it I've had to overlook inconsistencies in the plot several times. There are several grammatical errors that actually make it difficult to understand who is talking, or who they are talking about. As an example several times the author has written "he" when they meant "she" and vice versa.

I'm only ten chapters from the end and the other thing that's bothering me is the constant back and forth. One chapter Hermione is obsessed with Severus the next chapter she's all weird about him. Severus seems like he's barely interested in her at all at this point. They've been on a single date this entire time.

He's saying she's a virgin but she mentioned chapters ago that she and Ron had already been intimate.

Yeah again in this chapter Hermione thinks to herself that she doesn't understand why she'd want Snape to want her. Like she has no feelings for him.

This is quite good but I'm confused about the perspective change at times. In the beginning Hermione is in love with Snape, but as she spend more time with him it's never brought up in her own brain. She even feels weird about fantasizing about him in the prefects bathroom.

Snape says he wants to be her friend, but at the end of this chapter he clearly seems annoyed that they've become friends.

I'm getting a bad feeling about Narcissa and her cousin, same for May... something's up with the I'm guessing

Hell yeah! They are too cute together that I almost feel really, really tempted to skim through this and get to the scene they both can say thry want(and need) each other *grin.

THAT'S IT GIRL. Heaven, I stopped breathing when she realized she was drugged. I suppose I might not be good at hanging-point in stories lol

Oh my. I'm totally nailed by how quick our Hermione's thought was. She didn't let that moment consumed all of her reasons, force herself out of that temptation, and seek for help instead of throwing herself in again 'cause who knows what he is capable of in that state. It's a plus here that even his mind was clounded he still respected her, in a way.I hope she will stay like that until the end.

Just found this. Loved the first chapter. My heart broke a little for her. Better not to let it go further. She’s so sharp xx