| Reviews for Prior Rings: A Determinant Story |
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   Chenico chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 Loved this book! I was even laughing heartily out loud while reading one of the chapters (you’ll figure out which one). Every emotion in the gamut was felt while reading. Excellent job! |
| RebeccaAnne46 chapter 42 . 6/19/2019 Well after reading soo many fanfictions I knew that Tobias wasn't cheating on Tris and I kinda knew what would happen...but still I actually cried when Tris realised that Tobias was crying on the train. Thank you for another amazing chapter! |
| RebeccaAnne46 chapter 33 . 6/17/2019 THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER! I couldn't stop my laughter when our beloved Tris" ruined the moment" AND I SQUEALED SO LOUD THAT I STARTLED MY MUM |
| Guest chapter 57 . 1/6/2019 AWW I LOVED THIS |
| Guest chapter 57 . 10/28/2018 Such a beautiful story full of love,challenges,friendships, and forgiveness. Thank you for writing an amazing story and trilogy. |
| Guest chapter 57 . 10/28/2018 I would like to thank you for writing this trilogy. These stories will always be my favorite not just in this fandom. I have read different stories in different fandoms and enjoyed them but these stories will always stand out. It was so well written. The struggles they went through, reconnecting, starting a life together. Just loved all of it! |
| Guest chapter 56 . 10/28/2018 Even though I wish this story wasn’t ending, I like how it’s wrapping up. Tris is alive, she has two beautiful kids a devoted husband. For her life is good. A well deserved happy life! |
| Guest chapter 55 . 10/28/2018 Another heartbreaking amazingly good chapter. Forgiveness is a hard thing to do but for your peace of mind it needs to be done. Glad Tris made it thru. |
| Guest chapter 55 . 10/28/2018 This chapter was amazing! Tobias finding a way to forgive himself and others to let his baggage go while holding his son was just amazing. |
| Guest chapter 54 . 10/28/2018 This is WOW! My heart is breaking.I would love to have read the conversation between Kevin and Tobias. Loved the fact that Caleb went to seek his nephew out. |
| mlwil chapter 53 . 10/28/2018 Wow! Thanks for keeping it real. Poor Tobias |
| mlwil chapter 52 . 10/28/2018 Yay another little one on the way. Tris and Tobias will always be my otp. |
| mlwil chapter 51 . 10/28/2018 It’s good to see Amar is almost to his old self. I like how the faction seems more like a family than just a place. |
| mlwil chapter 50 . 10/28/2018 I think Peter’s POV was great. I feel it’s some kind of closure for his character stemming back from when he had to reveal himself during training for the Nusa fight and how Tobias and Peter bonded that day. How now he wants to break his own cycle and be a better person. I actually like the Peter/Four moments. |
| mlwil chapter 49 . 10/28/2018 Colic is real and very stressful! It’s a good thing Tobias took those classes not that he would hurt Tris and Abigail but gave him tools do deal with the stress. |
