Wow, just wow. It's been four years since you wrote this so I know it's late but wow, it's amazing. Really.
The description of raw emotion and the thoughts of Draco before and after his appearance in The Great Hall that match the scenes so perfectly and the fluidity of events and the triggers the moment Draco fell and broke down, it's just professional. Needless to mention the style and the delicately chosen words to describe everything, I just can't help thirsting for more of it.
However, there is still that moment of OOCness when Snape entered, his intervenience made me squeak in excitement at first but then hugging Draco and dropping his facade right in front of an audience doesn't seem to be his style, perhaps a shield of privacy should have been cast (or perhaps he did and we just don't know!). And what an audience by the way, I hope Ron and Hermoine's presence won't hurt Draco's pride more that Harry's would :3
But really, there should be a sequel, I need it haha. :3
Thank you for sharing it 3

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Ok mayb this review is way overdued but seriously you've portrayed such a broken-spirited Draco that I can't help but gushed.

This has always been a part of Draco that could have been explored further especially in the movieverse but unfortunately it was not.
Thank you for addressing this tortured/tormented/painfully heart-wrenching side of Malfoy we didnt get to see.

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No! It can't be over, I need more!

This is so sad! It's so emotional and i think it would have been a great scene in the canon, poor Draco looked just so stressed out!
Great job! I loved it!

Beautiful.

God this is really good. Amazingly well written. This may even be my favorite version of the bathroom scene.

My goodness. Surely there is more?

Amazing story! I seriously cried through this. Everything is spot on, and you had very few mistakes. I loved the character development, and how much depth you put into Draco. A

First of all, Frozen! Yes. That is all. Just yes :P

Alright, I'll actually review now :)

This is really good. I enjoyed this 'could have happened' fic, because it fits so well with the Draco in my headcanon rather than the Canon Draco. I love how hopeless he feels and that he couldn't fight any longer.
You have Harry perfect, absolutely spot on, and I loved how gentle Snape was when he arrived as well. It seems like you have all of my characters here :D

I didn't spot any mistakes and I really enjoyed reading this. Brilliant :D

Wonderfully done. :)

Omg I love this so much. If that scene in the book wasn't so thrilling, this is exactly how it should have gone. This pulls at my heart. Good job

That was amazing. I've always felt Draco was judged to harshly. This is what I always thought should have happened. Thank you for Writting this.

I like this sweet & sad what if story and hope that you do more one day !

The Crimson Mage.

I just cried hysterically. I loved this story. This would have changed so much of the war if Draco and Harry reacted like this. Great job. Loved it

This is great