Reviews for Don't Fear The Reaper
edeath756 chapter 22 . 18h
Add tsunade to harem
ghoast.cc chapter 25 . 7/16
Great work man. I look forward to the next chapter
Guest chapter 25 . 6/28
Great storyline looking forward too next chapters
marquis.shax chapter 25 . 6/27
I think for Pedomaru believing Tsunade could heal him is just a simple plot device but also there's the fact that, as pointed out by Hiruzen when doing the jutsu, Pedomaru doesn't know it so with no information available to him he believes that it's a physical injury and not a soul injury. I honestly believe that Kishimoto fucked that entire thing up since once Pedo switched bodies he suddenly had full use of his arms again, just like apparently he's able to split his own soul multiple times seeing as how the curse mark had some of his soul in it which is how Kabuto managed to revive him using a piece of flesh and Anko's curse mark. As for Tsukuyomi, Tsunade doesn't really "heal" the person she's just able to use her understanding of the chemicals in the brain, genjutsu, and probably advanced medical biology to make them wake up she however can't do anything about any trauma inflicted that would fall on Inoichi but we know Sasuke's pride and arrogance would never allow him to see a therapist. I'm also severely disappointed in how Kishimoto builds Jiraiya up as this spymaster and yet he somehow missed EVERYTHING that happened in canon lol. I'm sure that if he actually ran his spy ring properly he'd have noticed things in Wave and warned Sarutobi about sending a genin team there, he'd have noticed how Suna was losing missions to Konoha (Sarutobi should've known this too) and realize that it would make that nation hostile towards them if they didn't do something about it and then also sending a clearly psychotic/unstable jinchuriki to the genin exams knowing he could snap and kill multiple people before anybody could stop him isn't a sign of respect or trust either. Then there's the Akatsuki, how the hell did Jiraiya miss ALL of the members but Pedo, Itachi and Kisame if they're doing missions for other villages it surely wouldn't be the same two or three people doing all the missions for them so he should've been able to get the identity of other members
hellfire45 chapter 25 . 6/20
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 25 . 6/19
great chapter.
Kaore Ryu chapter 2 . 6/18
Why do I have this odd feeling that either some or all of those Rapers are Diablo 3 classes? You revealed nothing about them but for some strange reason thats nagging at the back of my mind I think they’re from Diablo. I’d guess Krumar the Barbarian, Xolom the Witch Doctor, Riaza the Demon Hunter, Palinus the Crusader, Cyora the Wizard, And Shahram the Monk. Don’t think you used the Necromancer though.
Ashura Kyoki chapter 13 . 6/17
I've read something akane to this chapter of a mind scape battle which I have a question if the battle is taking place in the mind scape wouldn't the owner of the mind scape example being naruto's mindscape be able to basically be god
Shifter chapter 25 . 6/15
Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next
ThatTerribleWriter78 chapter 1 . 6/16
I don't think he had any friends my boy
Power Taco chapter 25 . 6/15
If ever there was a girl in need of adding to a harem it's Shizune.
biginferno chapter 25 . 6/15
great chapter I am looking forward to the next and definitely looking forward to seeing Tayuya fall more for Naruto I assume Kin,Ino and the others will push her towards him
SPark681 chapter 25 . 6/15
Hmm, damn Kisame survived anyways keep up the great work!
VFSNAKE chapter 25 . 6/15
Awesome! Naruto stuck it to the elders. And kisame is deaf. Love it
buterflypuss chapter 25 . 6/15
Good chap
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