I simply love this story and the sequel. I'm glad I found it once it was complete otherwise it would've drive me crazy waiting for another chapter hahaha.

Thank you! I love 12 and love the way you wrote him and his relationship with Clara. If I could only find a way to save this story in my laptop, to read it again when Im not online.

Utterly brilliant! Loved the sprawling nature, how it spanned the shift from eleven to twelve...and dealing with regaining trust...and it was just v romantic and the prose v lyrical in parts...v engaging and heartfelt thank you

Your talent with words is incredible! Well bloody done: I would read an entire fricking book written by you! Thanks so much for taking the time to create this amazing thing for free, absolutely loved every second.

Love ya!

I am dying of cuteness right now.

So cute!

:3

Gaw that's sweet!

Absolutely beautifully handled!

Ugh...

AGE GAP!

Nice way to treat a girl.
Screw her then wipe her mind.
But he shouldn't have screwed her in the first place my god.

Bloody hell. Frisky smut or what!
Until that last sentence I was convinced you handled this rather well.
Oh well.

I love that you have addressed the age gap! Yes! Finally!

I do ship Twelve and Clara, but in the kind of he tells her he loves her but gets immediately rejected after explaining it's a romantic love.

Also, Twelve is definitely asexual.

This is a very accurate depiction of Twelve! I absolutely love it!

Would read the other one, but I can't find it :(

That was so perfect!

Just wanted to say that this is completely accurate; regaining trust means that the wounded party needs to make the choices, needs to confirm they have a choice. I very much like how you showed this dynamic of forgiveness, something natural, with lots of time and space and genuine feelings from both parties.