This story was fantastic. The smut elements were enjoyable, characters felt like themselves, and things wrap up nicely. My only complaint would be things seem to move rather fast at parts in terms of relationships, but I could understand just trying to get through all the content. Overall, great.

I ship them

This is totally normal

Lol! Haha! Best! Ending! Ever! This here is the Madoka Magica of harem anime stories lol! Real-life detail and consequences for actions, and even with a horrifying ending involving time travel!

Seriously, I don't know what any of the critics here who hated this ending or this story are even talking about! This was great! THIS makes me want to start writing some fanfictions again! lol

Why do I have sinking feeling that Himawari is going to come down with a sudden case of the stomach flu, too? Lol!

So, a few things that were awesome about this chapter.

First, Chizuru smoking is the best fan development I've ever heard off, and I'm kicking myself for having not thought of it. To the point that I plan to steal it just as a head's up lol!

Secondly, Kyoko and Yutaka on the pathway to finally getting hitched, although I feel there will still be some obstacles ahead.

Third, Yutaka having sex with Nadeshiko, finding out the reason, then when Sakurako asks him why is he in her house, he's just like, "Nothing important!" Like DAMN! Lol! Cold-blooded!

Have to say, this story actually does capture the real life struggle of being a teenaged guy, or at least presents the problems of Yutaka in a context that is realistic. As much as we would all like to maintain high standards and not debase ourselves, we are very capable of caving to our base desires for beautiful girls who are interested in us. Yutaka is a good soul regardless, and it's a shame his first two times were with girls who didn't value him very highly, but I hope that by the end he will be restored by the girl who loves him most!

Good hetero story so far. Despite your lesbianity, you write male Yui well and credible.

Ah, man. Sakurako is his his first time, really? Lol. I was hoping it would be Kyoko, but whatever.

Anyway, Nadeshiko's sudden conversion was great, lol. Not sure if cradle snatcher Nadeshiko represents the on-screen character, but I couldn't help but find it very funny. Only affirms in my mind that Yutaka is a female at heart.

Lol, yeap nothing more peogane than a boy violating the purity if an all-girl school! Lol. Well, Yutata is the exception since clearly he can turn lesbians straight, as clearly seen by him planting seeds all over town.l, and it will be interesting to see how this all plays out.

Also, it would seem that Yutata is just as impressionable as Yui if the cross dressing is an indication of anything. Even if it was rather amusing. Although, I do say it would've been even funnier if there was a little Chinatsu and Akari gushing over Yutata seeing him in the girl's uniform or something like that, but Kyoko rushing off back to the main school building in his clothes felt exactly like Yuru Yuri.

This story is great so far. Can't wait to get to the good parts.

Oh okay. Lol. It makes sense now. Yui isn't a furatani, she's an actual male, and she doesn't go to Nanomori, but a different school altogether. The only question is have is whether she, or he rather have any yaoi relationships in his all guy school lol.

Anyway this was a pretty good retelling of the first episode of Yuru Yuri with male Yui. Lol. I do like that you had Akari seducing Yutata to start of the series, since Akari is the protagonist, after all. I do hope that Yutata's rejection didn't break her sensitive heart, but I suppose that Yutata has to keep in mind that Akane would kill him if he did.

Also, Chinatsu didn't like boys a second ago, then when Yutata helped her out with Kyoko, she liked Yutata then. So, is Chinatsu a lesbian or not in this universe? Lol. Or does Chinatsu just like everyone who stands up for her? Lol.

Wondering how this all plays out. Will have to read to find out. But off to a good, strong start so far!

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Me after reading this god damn fanfic.

This went every way I expected and quite a few I didn't. Kudos on that ending. I expected this to end in a very wealthy abortion clinic and you surprised me with a happy ending.

ooooohhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Literally the only in character thing in this fucking train wreck was the bit with Sock and House in the Cafe

Dont do this ever again i mean Yui is fine being Yui
Yutaka is being Gamer Yutaka not a Man-whore (sorry for cussin their) but good story? I guess?

I'm usually just into complete Yuri,
but I skimmed at first to see if I would read this.

The end result was I found this fic amusing and worth the read.
I thought it was an interesting twist to an all Yuri cast.
Plus it held my interest for the entire fic.

Over all I liked how you wrote this. :)