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Awesome storyyyy (o)

Yay! I love this tory sooooooooo, much. You're a great author you know, cant wait for the next update

This is sooooo amazing and awesome! Don't ever stop writing, you're so good at it! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ahhhh so cute... really like this story. Hehe

Well then...

Ahhhh so beautiful i love this pairing and this story is so beautiful OH my gosh I hope you update soon!

Wow! So hot here

Awesome! This was hot! Please update, I need more AcexLuffyxSabo smut. Your style is amazing, so please don't drop this story! I can't wait for more:)

I would of never of thought to write a story with Ace, Sabo, and Luffy as animals, but this is an amazing story!

Oh my God! This is awesome! I'm reading this for the fifth time! Please update soon, I need more!

Cheers! What a quick update! Thank you so much for your hard work! You're SUPER!

Anyway, what concerns the chapter - it was hot! Luffy was so cute and Ace was a real sweetheart, a nice change of pace from his rougher, otherwise cocky demeanour. You have a really nice style, it's simple and natural, yet so tasteful and not vulgar, which makes the story a pleasure to read. I really enjoy your story.

In addition, it was nice how you depicted Sabo's diplomacy. He's a breath of common sense among the colourful and unique, usually very quirky characters. He's the intelligent, kinder brother, but with a dark twist. I loved how you brought all those qualities of him in this chapter and in the previous one, especially where he made love to Luffy when Ace had passed out. His dirty talk mixed with concern was brilliant, in my opinion, or when he got strict and possessive of the little lamb after the steamy sex next morning. I hope to see more of it.

Now, on a side note, I've noticed a reoccurring mistake and feel the need to point it out. 'To' and 'too' is often confused, so be careful with that.

'To' is used as a preposition, for example 'We took the train to London', or as a verb stem as a part of the verb phrase, for example 'I would like to see you soon'.

'Too' is used to describe something excessively, for example 'You are driving too fast', or in place of words such as 'also' and 'as well', for example 'I would like some ice-cream too'.

I hope this explanation makes sense:)

Other than that, it was a wonderful chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one (hopefully there will be some alone time between Sabo and Luffy just to be fair because Ace had his moment with Luffy). Also, I think you spoilt me with such a fast update, for I'll be pacing around impatiently for the next one.

Thank you once again for sharing your work and caring for your readers by putting so much time and effort into your writing.

Best of luck to you. I'm looking forward for more.

Your fan,
-Yu

Yes beautiful updates yes

I can't wait to see Luffy in teacher mode! :)

Yay! An update! Thank you very much!

It seems like your language improved! I'm so glad! It was quite a pleasure to read it, without those super long, rather confusing sentences.

On the other hand, I felt that this chapter was a bit rushed. But that's only because I'm a terrible sadist who wanted to see Luffy suffer a bit more. Since he was put "on display" and treated like "a doll", I wanted Ace and Sabo to really look at him, admire their new prized possession so to speak and play with him more. Then, in my oppinion at least, "the saving part" would've been a bit more dramatic. I got a bit disappointed when I didn't get this dirty candy here, if you see what I mean. God, I'm beyond saving.

Other than that, it was good, sweet and fluffy. I like where this is going. You're awesome.

Thank you again for updating and sharing. Also, happy spring! I hope everything is going well for you, you are a wonderful author.

Can't wait for more.

Your fan,
-Yu