| Reviews for Ruined Girls Write in Cursive |
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shy fly chapter 1 . 6/14/2018 first of all i apologize for like being a total creep but i've been here since you uploaded your first story and i can't believe it's been four years already? what the fuck i was fourteen yesterday the truth is i kind of got out of the dl fandom for a while but somehow got sucked back in recently and just decided to check up on you, and fuck i got so happy when saw that you updated not so long ago lmao. you've been gone for so long i was a bit worried you know! honestly i'm just happy to know you're alive but hopefully i'll get to read you soon! (on a completely unrelated note please tell me your new penname is because of genius honeyboy min yoongi because if so i will take you as my wife) |
eris1989 chapter 9 . 4/6/2017 love this story hope to read more soon |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/8/2016 please update |
VampWolf chapter 9 . 5/29/2016 This is a really nice fic i hope you update soon. You can do both hings i guess keep this one and sart another the way you wanted make this one. They could be like side routes , idk |
Black Julip chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Are you kidding, you did a pretty good job on the poem. |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/7/2015 Please continue.. ...its a really good story |
bluebarnowl chapter 9 . 12/8/2015 What I want to know, is how Raito knew what was going to happen? |
mytwistedview chapter 9 . 12/7/2015 Don't delet this! I love this fic and you're writing! You're doing amazing and I love what's going on in the fic! You're main character is nice and I enjoy how you've been pacing this. Please keep writing it, it really makes my day when you update it! |
VampireSiren chapter 9 . 12/7/2015 Ooh, very interesting! XD ...NOOOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE DON'T DELETE THIS; I REALLY ENJOY READING YOUR DIABOLIKLOVERS FANFIC! |
Alisialy chapter 9 . 12/7/2015 Worse to worse, consider it a draft, but keep writing, just for the heck of it. I'll speak for most readers and say the story is nice or we wouldn't be back. Keep writing, no matter how bad, and if you feel like you've run out of ideas or the plot isn't following, roll with it and come up with a new one or just post oneshots of the important stuff, while working on a longer version fix somewhere else. I know I like the story and would like to see it continue, I hope this isn't deleted like so many other good fics. |
mytwistedview chapter 8 . 12/3/2015 oh my god I love this! please continue writing! |
Misia0123 chapter 8 . 10/19/2015 Nice! I like this story too! I'm planning on reading ałl your diabolik lobers fanfics so I hope to see another great chapter soon! XD gdluck! |
VampireSiren chapter 8 . 10/7/2015 Just finished reading these 8 chapters of His New Little Prey, and I think this is simply incredible! :) This is a fantastic Laito Sakamaki fanfic here! |
Vilaya chapter 8 . 8/28/2015 I'm sorry. I've been stalking this story for a while and haven't had the courage to review up until now. You see, I hate-watched Diabolik Lovers back in June. I quickly figured out that, as much as he made my skin crawl, I enjoyed Laito's (Raito's?) screentime. I wrote a blog about my experience hate watching the anime and an internet friend of mine told me that she was a huge Diabolik Lovers fan and sent me links to the manga chapters. Apparently I had to read them. It was after reading Laito's chapters that I decided that I liked him. Being me, I looked up fanfiction he was in and found this one here. Yikes. I can't believe that I'm admitting this, but I *love* this story! To top it off, you said something along the lines of His New Little Pray being similar to a book called Fearscape by Nenia Campbell. I read it in, like, two nights. It was a headache finding Horrorscape (I had to keep reading!) and finally Terrorscape. I probably shouldn't be reading such stuff, but thanks for the recommendation xD -By the way, I was a bit shocked that Yuka is twelve in the beginning and flashbacks. Fearscape kinda made the idea tolerable to me, but yikes. I know that it might scare some people away, but I do think that you should edit that info into the first chapter. Though no fear, I'll be loyally reading! Please~ keep writing! Make this story your priority! Update frequently! Basically just keep my new favorite updated. Thank you so much for writing this! This won't be the last that you hear from me. That |
Lea chapter 8 . 8/23/2015 Hello! So, I've just finished to read the last two chapters, you've updated really quick ! :D As usual, the story is so cool! It was weird to have a nice raito, not usual, but you made it great! Kobe's such a jerk! I didn't expected him to have this kind of...party x) Btw, i was really happy when I saw that you answered to my comment! I was like "wait...Léa...but that's me!" XD Anyway, I'm eager to discover the sequel of your story! Bye ! |