Enjoyed the story very much. A great job with the characters. I had no trouble hearing them all in my head. Thanks!

This is my favourite episode and I love seeing it from the POV of other characters. And added to the fact that this is from the POV of my favourite character is even better!

Lovely! I love it!

Very nice. Cap is a great character. I love his POV.

I love this!

A very nice look inside Cap's head.

Gotta love us some Cap. And Chet.

I love that you mention that Cap had the mic backwards. The harping on the extractor being tossed was a bit much but the story was really good. Thank you.

Nicely done. I could hear Cap in my mind and I think you did as good of a job capturing him as you did with Chet-and that was excellent.

Awesome! and yes answered some questions ! I also agree this has great potential as a series!

Very well done, again. Thanks :
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Great series, enjoying this very much. All so true to the characters. My favorite stories are the ones that do this...get inside the heads of the guys within a specific episode. Very well done.

Very well done. I like the idea of doing this incident as a series from the viewpoints if each member of the team. It just emphasizes the closeness of the men. Thanks for writing!

Very well done! Glad to see Cap's vulnerable side...and the 'backward Mic' finally explained! Can't wait for the next POV!

You've captured Hank's fears so well. You've even added a little humor that adds to the realism. Well done!

I enjoyed this one too - very well done!