Is there more to the story then just these two chapters

The way your dialogue is typed is confusing to me a bit. It is hard to tell who is speaking. I'm not sure if it's just the way it formatted when you uploaded your story or if it's the way it was typed. It just seems that a new line starts in the wrong place.

for example.
...Gajeel now regretted what he said.
"Shrimp...I" Koga walked up to Levy laughing and grabbed her arm.
"is it true Levy! did you cheat this bandit out of love?"

this passage would read clearer (in my opinion) if it was formatted as such:
...Gajeel now regretted what he said, "Shrimp...I"
Koga walked up to Levy laughing and grabbed her arm. "Is it true Levy? Did you cheat this bandit out of love?'

same for the first chapter..
example:
"Is this the Fairy Tail guild?" Gajeel smirked and pointed to the logo on the door.
"The one and only, Whatcha doing here? the pirate removed his hat and bowed in respect.

would read easier
"Is this the Fairy Tail guild?
Gajeel smirked and pointed to the logo on the door. "The one and only, Whatcha doing here?"
The pirate removed his hat and bowed in respect.

not sure if that is helpful to you at all.. just one reader's opinion. The content itself is interesting and I hope you keep writing. Poor Gajeel. GaLe forever! lol.

This story kinda confuses me, but I'll keep reading, 'kay?

Awww poor Gajeel-kun :(