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Please continue

You updated! Yay

I certainly had to reread the previous chapters in order to get the feel of the story again, but man did I enjoy it! I honestly thought this was abandoned. I'm really glad to see that you haven't given it up despite the difficulties you had.

I loved how the dialogue was made XD and how thrilling the story keeps on getting. I hope a new chapter gets published soon :). Take your time though. Haha! Keep up the great work!

Btw...

Is "Father" Remington or is he the man who threw Valarie into the van? Oooh! So curious! Hahaha can't wait to see who.

Aw, I really like this story, but it's been so long since you updated it. Please tell me you're going to continue?

Love it update soon plz

Loving this story. Itll be great to see where the characters end up. Just wondering does she get shot ? Can't wait for the next chapter

Loved the first chapter.

I luv this story, pretty please update?

I just love this so much! *.* Chrono is awesome

Nooo! Not a cliffy! I want to know what happens next.A really great chapter. I felt the pain both characters had and I even cried a little on rosette's death scene. Though I want to find out where the gun shots came from! Grr. Is it from the order? The men who were chasing after her? Maybe it was the grounds keeper trying to protect the girl? I have got to know.

Woah. I'm pretty sure I read chapter 4 but now I can't see it. I loved it though. I wish I could say more but this fic is absolutely well made. There was an error (at least I think it was, it sure got me confused.) concerning the mother's (?) name. At first she was named Dawn, if I'm not mistaken, and then it was changed to something else. I was sleepy when I read it and it's probably my sleepy mind that got things mixed up. I would have given a review as soon as I read it but I couldn't think of anything to say except that it was good and that I wanted more.

I do hope you continue, been awhile since I've read a good Chrono fic in a long while

I really love how you write your chapters. If you were an author of some book, I'd definitely buy them. I could really see the scenes play in my head and could really feel the character's emotions. Thank you for updating and keep up the good work!