This is perfect!

So glad someone else sees her this way too. I just can’t see Elsa the same way anymore.

Knock it the fuck off!

Elsa should be saying do feel. Let it go and don't conseal. So knock off the BS! And Elsa better be gay.

Hurm.

Ha!

Ho.

Hm.

It was a LITTLE more than fifty years for Cap. To quote Fury he said he'd been asleep for "almost seventy years."

this was really good

Mojave? This is a strange coincidence, but I was just playing Fallout: New Vegas less than an hour ago.

Duuuuuuude

LOVE IT!

Well, this was brilliant. Aside from nailing everybody's personality just so, you integrated Elsa into the Avengers so well, I can't imagine her not being there. And if you think about it, where else would she be if she was alive today, other than locked away in some government lab?

Elsa's fears and guilt and inner monologues were absolutely perfect. Who better to talk her through it all than Phil? Of course, having Steve there to say "I know how you feel" just made it even better.

I think the my favorite part was Elsa's fish-out-of-temporal-water adjustment to the modern world. I'm a big fan of seeing the events of something we know through the eyes of someone who has no idea what's going on. You gave us both, along with giving Elsa something important to do that didn't take any credit away from the rest of the team, not to mention something that perfectly matched her personality, and her powers.

Now I'm off to read the rest of the stories, as soon as I get a chance. I'm typically an Elsanna fan (of the unrelated AU variety), and I understand there's no shipping in this series, but if you wanted to put Elsa and Phil together, I would support it. Enthusiastically.

This is such a fun story! It's pretty cool that Elsa's ice has the ability to keep people alive even without the super serum. I'm a little confused why Fury kept Olaf from Elsa. I really liked Elsa's addition to the final fight scene in New York.

I think this story would be REALLY hard to follow for someone who had never seen the Avengers before, so if you'd like to elaborate on Elsa's learning curve, the added exposition would probably help some readers and give you more of a chance to integrate Elsa into the Avenger team dynamics.

Great job!