It's a shame this delightful tale has apparently been abandoned. The storytelling is rather good, and I have quite enjoyed seeing the differences between Harley's reality and Harry's. (Although, "Harriet" seems a more logical choice for her name. ;D) You've created what seems to be just the right amount of difference between the two universes to make them interesting rather than outlandish. Plus, I have been enjoying the twists she has made to events and scenes we all know.

Although Harley occasionally seems a bit Mary Sue-ish (always JUST happening to be at the right place at the right time to interact with characters during pivotal scenes), for the most part she is not. She's not better than others at their jobs, middling with her schoolwork, she's cranky and sometimes unreasonable, and she's not smarter than everyone else.

I'm not sure what to think of her eventual relationship with Snape. It seems a bit squicky that he would (at an agonizingly glacial pace) someday replace his affections for Lily with her DAUGHTER?! Oddly enough though, I think I could get used to it. They'll marry and have three kids – two daughters and a son, right? Lol!

Barb

I love your story and I can't wait to see where you go next. Are all the major players in Harley's life going to be gainig their memories of her or just Snape. It's been a while since you have updated, I hope everything is alright and that you come back to your story soon.

Real interresting fic! Thanks for sharing.
So refreshing to see a femharry who is not a carbon copy of her cp in everyway down to most of her experiences making the gender flip pointless. No Harley is vibrant and uniqely her own. :D

when he put it that way, it seemed truly impossible for them to be together...

its a shame that this story hasn't been updated in 2 years. it certainly was an interesting one.

I love this story. And I am sad that you haven't updated in so long, I hope everything is going okay

This is one of my favourite girl Potter stories!

I looooooooooove this story. It's so refreshing. please please please update! I have an addiction and I need a hit.

Awesome fic!

I *really* don't understand why Harley wouldn't have told Snape about the diary. Surely she would know that Snape would be better able to glean any information from the thing than she would? And that he would be able to protect himself from it better than she had? Despite apparently not getting any information about what had happened in her world, surely Harley would find preventing more petrifications to be more important than personally discovering more about the diary?

And more importantly, why would Snape let her go without forcing her to tell him the whole story from beginning to end?

Just FYI, Harry wasn't able to see the thestrals until after seeing Cedric die in the Triwizard Tournament, despite his mother being killed right in front of him as a baby, so Harley probably wouldn't be able to see them.

So, uh, if Harley has all this knowledge of the future, why haven't Snape and Dumbledore interrogated her yet? (And if they have, it should probably have been mentioned by now.) Even if it somehow magically never came up before, Harley flat out stated that she was from an alternate reality future in this chapter when she complained about having to go through Lockhart's class again. Surely Dumbledore would at least want to know what happened in her world and see if he could possibly use any of that information?

I kinda want to see what happened in Harley's world after she died.

Eeee don't let the story die!